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IN THAT HEAVY RAIN

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Below is the poem entitled IN THAT HEAVY RAIN which was written by poet aneesh lawrence. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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IN THAT HEAVY RAIN

I DON'T KNOW HOW IT HAPPENED A REVERBERATION MORE THAN A DREAM SHE WAS NAUGHTY AND ALWAYS LIKED RAIN I TOO MADE MY CHOICES COME CLOSE TO HER SHE SPOKE LITTLE BUT HER EYES TOLD A LOT WE SHARED DAYS NIGHTS AND EVEN DREAMS I CANT EXPLAIN WHETHER IT WAS HER TEARS OR NOT THE PROFOUND RAIN SHOWED ALL ITS EXTREMITY THE DRUMBEATS MADE MY EARS A HORRIBLE EFFECT THE NIGHT SCREAMED MORE THAN THAT OF A CHERUB I COULD'NT RECOGNIZE IT WITH THE HEART BEAT OF NEWBORN IN OUR THOUGHTS THERE REMAINED THE COOL VIBRANT WHISPER OF LOVE

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  1. Date: 2/28/2012 5:15:00 AM
    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Aneesh. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol

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    Date: 2/28/2012 9:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    THANKS CAROL..