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Roaming These Lands

Often I cry these tears, Trying to wash away my fears. Preparing myself for the worst, With a feeling my heart may burst. Forcing my heart into remorse, Hoping It will stay on course. Always walking to a bright new day, Where the pain will keep at bay. As the winds stretch through my soul, My heart sets on a new goal. I looked at myself in the mirror, As death rolls closer and nearer. I traveled through the angry lands, While angels call out hopeful demands. Looking up into the sky, Closing my eyes as I see the doves cry. Gliding onto each stepping-stone, As fate grows carelessly more prone. In these lands I still roam, No matter how much desire is shown.
~A Callab With Dan Kearley(:~ !!

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  1. Date: 3/5/2012 5:41:00 AM

    Excellently done, to you both! :) "My heart sets on a new goal." <-- key line in this piece.

  1. Date: 2/28/2012 7:00:00 AM

    Hi Cali, just seen this on Dan's page, really love this profound poem, such feeling in every word. harry

    Mitchell Avatar Cali Mitchell Date: 2/28/2012 8:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thankyou, it is a pretty decent poem afterall.(:
  1. Date: 2/27/2012 1:16:00 PM

    :o) Alright! Very nice... :o)

  1. Date: 2/27/2012 8:57:00 AM

    a very nice collab, indeed! Enjoyed. You cannot even tell where one person stopped and another started, very good. hugs, Catie :)

    Mitchell Avatar Cali Mitchell Date: 2/27/2012 10:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thankyou, and it was a half half deal(: HUGS!!!