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Spring Birds

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I painted myself into a corner with this one with the choice of words..I left it for maybe a lesson in what not to do..I was thinking of what baby birds look like at first coming out of the egg..A creature that only a mother can see potential..Sara


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Spring Birds

Tiny Whiny Shiny Veiny In spring birds have tiny whiny child With skin that is shiny veiny mild

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  1. Date: 2/29/2012 6:32:00 AM
    You describe the hatchlings well, liked the style.

  1. Date: 2/27/2012 12:23:00 PM
    LOL, yes, baby birds are so odd-looking, aren't they?

  1. Date: 2/27/2012 7:40:00 AM
    Enjoyed reading your excellent poetry today Sara. Please keep your pen flowing and keep sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/26/2012 2:50:00 PM
    wonderful use of this form Sara and such a vivid portrait of all the qualities of Spring birds luv..

  1. Date: 2/26/2012 2:07:00 PM
    This is a great example of a Tyburn, because I loved the words you chose for the top four! They are awesome words and used perfectly down on the last two lines! You did very well with this form! I really enjoyed reading this write this afternoon! Excellent Work!!

  1. Date: 2/26/2012 11:45:00 AM
    dainty verse filled with descriptive wordplay, sara... baby birds herald the gentle burst of spring... enagaing!..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 2/26/2012 11:12:00 AM
    Very sweet write Sara , Hugs and best wishes , Declan xxx

  1. Date: 2/26/2012 9:34:00 AM
    oh, and I just saw the picture too. WE can understand where the term ugly ducking came from!

  1. Date: 2/26/2012 9:33:00 AM
    ahhh,this is a sweet spring picture, Sara. NICELY done. thanks for your soupmail.

  1. Date: 2/26/2012 8:30:00 AM
    Very nice form with such perfect words....luv Michael

  1. Date: 2/26/2012 7:36:00 AM
    This one has a add on just click on "About This Poem"..Sara :)