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Undetermined

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Undetermined


Captive by the thought of death,
I feel I have nothing left.
She hides away her truthful fears,
all she has left is many tears.

Her world is starting to fall apart,
She is feeling the pain in her heart.
She can't unravel the solution to her doubt,
help is what she needs, 
a lonely girl on her own, day after day she pleads.

Her actions are misunderstood, 
sadness deep within, the battle she is fighting,
she knows that she can't win.

Pondering the mystery of what lies
beyong the grave, wanting to give up, 
because she knows she can't be saved.

Cause of death... Undetermined.

                                                    COLLEEN MARIE BONO
                                                        February 25, 2012

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  1. Date: 5/30/2013 9:46:00 PM
    Hi Colleen, wow... over the reason of death.... Congratulations with your awesome winning free verse poem... xox~ LINDA

  1. Date: 5/28/2013 6:49:00 PM
    congrats on your amazing win. take care cory

  1. Date: 5/28/2013 6:38:00 PM
    Congratulations on your well deserve win. Connie

  1. Date: 5/28/2013 6:20:00 PM
    Very sad poem, but written very well. Congrats! Thanks for submitting to my contest. Kim

  1. Date: 2/25/2012 4:46:00 PM
    God bless... sad poem, Colleen

  1. Date: 2/25/2012 3:45:00 PM
    hi Colleen, what saddens me most about this poem, is that it began in the first person and then switched abruptly to the third person.. I use to refer to myself in poetry as the third person, so I do understand the depth of pain, the cry for help, and the iron clad pride you feel. best wishes, Catie :)