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Please can you come

The moons have disappeared in the fluffy clouds For I have seen them leave. I surely think that you would come My heart seems to believe. I imagine that I can fly to you And bring you back on my dainty wings. I hear that you live in a land ashore, Which is full of queens and kings. But, what do you really do Dad? Is it something that I don’t know. I have grown up big - mummy said:) tell me your secret in a voice very low. When I close my eyes I see of you, For a while till you say goodbye. And I open my eyes as fast as I can Somehow, to make truth out of a lie. It is a day of joy when I wait for you, Imagining the gifts you would bring. But it is the way you call me sweetly, That makes my heart really sing. Please can you come… Everyday and Everywhere… It doesn’t make sense without you here.

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  1. Date: 7/9/2014 3:43:00 PM
    A beautiful, emotional tribute to your father, Shadaab - no wonder it is on the winners' list! Congratulations!

  1. Date: 6/19/2014 1:00:00 PM
    This is such a heartfelt poem no wonder it wins. Congratz!

  1. Date: 6/15/2014 3:13:00 PM
    touched my heart, dear Shadaab. elaine

  1. Date: 6/13/2014 10:09:00 AM
    Love it.. Beautifully done.

  1. Date: 6/12/2014 9:46:00 PM
    First place win that comes from the heart.. Awesome!

  1. Date: 6/12/2014 9:14:00 PM
    Very heart felt poem! Congrad's on your winning verse. Light & Love

  1. Date: 6/12/2014 6:46:00 AM
    Congrats, Shadaab.. Such a touching write.. I, as you wonder what loved ones who have gone are experiencing. I think it is a beauty and love our human minds could not withstand.. Hugs... Arlene..

  1. Date: 6/11/2014 10:20:00 PM
    Shadaab, Congratulations, a wonderful and heartfelt win. Love ~LINDA

  1. Date: 6/10/2014 7:27:00 PM
    heartwarming call to a sweet father, shadaab... a greeat win!.. huggs

  1. Date: 6/10/2014 6:41:00 PM
    Oh a treasure of a poem, I wish I could give you a big hug, what a way of words and emotions. Very well done :)

  1. Date: 6/10/2014 2:19:00 PM
    Such a lovely tribute to dad Mumtaz !! A longing to see him everytime everywhere,, that's what I also feel ,, congrats on great win !.

  1. Date: 6/10/2014 9:18:00 AM
    Beautiful and bittersweet..congrats on your win Shaddab! love, Deb

    Wilson Avatar Deb Wilson
    Date: 6/10/2014 9:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    sorry I just realized I misspelled your name!
  1. Date: 6/9/2014 10:49:00 PM
    Nicely done. congrats on the win, Shaddab

  1. Date: 6/9/2014 7:15:00 PM
    Congratulations, Shadaab, on your top win.

  1. Date: 6/9/2014 6:58:00 PM
    Worthy of the number 1 it received. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 6/30/2012 7:38:00 PM
    A yearning....artfully presented! Shadaab! Jimbo

  1. Date: 4/12/2012 12:26:00 PM
    A beautiful poem, Shadaab -Very touching indeed. I was deeply moved. Thanks Shadaab, for your very kind feelings on my poem The Wound. I am deeply touched

  1. Date: 2/25/2012 4:34:00 PM
    A beautiful and touching poem Shadaab. - oxox love Anne-Lise