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Burning Sands

Blazing sun and burning sands,

laughing squeals of delight.

Glistening waters, crashing waves,

Beautiful partner, what a sight.

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  1. Date: 2/27/2012 1:38:00 PM

    Endearing and quite lovely Christopher. The images are so warm, it's wants Summer to be here :)

    Bunton Avatar Christopher Bunton Date: 2/27/2012 6:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank You!
  1. Date: 2/24/2012 5:35:00 PM

    A great write, short and sweet. I enjoyed reading it. Would be cute to put it on stock paper with a photo behind it and frame it.

    Bunton Avatar Christopher Bunton Date: 2/25/2012 5:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank You!
  1. Date: 2/24/2012 4:23:00 PM

    This should be in a card or written on the sands of that beach... excellent work my friend... Michael

    Bunton Avatar Christopher Bunton Date: 2/25/2012 5:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank You!!