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A Spring Time Hidden Bunny's Trail

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A Spring Time Hidden Bunny's Trail

A Spring Time Hidden Bunny’s Trail




Once upon a time in a village nearby
There were five little bunnies that were very unique
And each year when spring would arrive
They dreaded for spring to leave

So one day in winter, as they were hopping away
They found a hidden trail that no one in the village ever seen
As they continued hopping so very far away
They discovered at the end of the hidden trail lived the season of spring

When they arrived, there was a castle named Spring Time
Along beside the castle they found a magical crystal egg rested on the green grass 
So they picked it up in excitement wondering what they would find
And inside they was a secret explaining how to have spring time forever last

The secret revealed that the magical crystal egg 
Had to be placed on the brown grass in a village they called home
So off they went hopping so quickly on each leg
To reach to their village they called their own

Once they put the magical crystal egg on the grass 
Suddenly the sun began to shine and the birds began to sing
All the leaves began to grow on the trees so very fast
While so many flowers began to blossom as they welcomed spring

They hopped with joy knowing that spring would never leave again
Still years later, the people in the village all tell the same tail
About these five curious bunnies that hopped down a trail until they reached the end
And found a magical secret for their village in a springtime hidden bunny’s trail…
Contest: Bunny Rabbits Sponsor: Carol Brown Poet: Gail Doyle

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  1. Date: 3/2/2012 8:17:00 PM

    GAIL... CONGRATULATIONS ..ON YOUR WONDERFUL WIN~ Have yourself a very nice night ;-)*always..pd

  1. Date: 3/1/2012 6:42:00 PM

    Gail, This is an awesome poem. Your ability to tell a story, in poetry form, is amazing. Congrats on winning Carol's contest.........................S.Ronthorpe

  1. Date: 3/1/2012 11:00:00 AM

    Gail, What a wonderful story and poem! I hope there are youngsters to share this with as well. Congrats

    Doyle Avatar Gail Angel Doyle
    Date: 3/1/2012 4:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Craig, thank you for enjoying this poem. Hugs and love always, Gail
  1. Date: 3/1/2012 12:28:00 AM

    A lovely story congratulations Gail xx

    Doyle Avatar Gail Angel Doyle
    Date: 3/1/2012 4:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Mandy, thanks for congratulating me on my win in Carol Brown's contest. Hugs, Gail
  1. Date: 2/29/2012 9:49:00 PM

    ohh wow.. another super delight of a poem from you, gail ad all… applause for the thrilling win! ..:) huggs!

    Doyle Avatar Gail Angel Doyle
    Date: 3/1/2012 4:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Nette, thank you for enjoying my bunny poem today. Hugs always, Gail
  1. Date: 2/29/2012 8:00:00 PM

    Congrats, Gail, on your win with this adorable bunny tale! Blessings, Rhonda

    Doyle Avatar Gail Angel Doyle
    Date: 3/1/2012 4:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Rhonda, thanks for enjoying my bunny tale poem today. Maybe your son would love it. Hugs to always Gail
  1. Date: 2/29/2012 5:07:00 PM

    a mystical place perpetual spring, yes to mind does eden bring, with love n life in everything , happy bunnies there for sure...well done..

    Doyle Avatar Gail Angel Doyle
    Date: 2/29/2012 6:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Don for your sweet comment on the bunny poem. Hugs to you always, Gail
  1. Date: 2/29/2012 2:16:00 PM

    Wonderful children's story! Congrad's on your hoppi' good win! Light & Love

  1. Date: 2/29/2012 12:31:00 PM

    Thanks Linda, for congratulating me on my win today in Carol Brown's contest. Hugs and love to you always, Gail

  1. Date: 2/29/2012 10:15:00 AM

    congrats Gail on a fantastico win for this lovely write sweetly penned on bunnies luv..

    Doyle Avatar Gail Angel Doyle
    Date: 2/29/2012 6:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Linda, thank you for congratulating me on my win in Carol's contest. Hugs and love to you always, Gail
  1. Date: 2/29/2012 8:27:00 AM

    Beautifully written. Congratulations on your win with this great poem.

    Doyle Avatar Gail Angel Doyle
    Date: 2/29/2012 9:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Carol for congratulating me on my win today in Carol Brown's contest. Hugs, Gail
  1. Date: 2/29/2012 8:20:00 AM

    This is a wonderful poem, sounding as if an old legend passed down generation to generation. A wonderful winning poem, Gail! Well done!

    Doyle Avatar Gail Angel Doyle
    Date: 2/29/2012 9:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Carrie, I was trying to write something like something you would find in a children's book and I thought of this story. Thanks for all your support and congratulating on my win. Hugs always, Gail
  1. Date: 2/29/2012 7:46:00 AM

    Congratulations on your winning piece and thank you for supporting my "Bunny Rabbits" contest Gail. Love, Carol

    Doyle Avatar Gail Angel Doyle
    Date: 2/29/2012 9:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Carol, thank you for having my poem be placed first place. It was a pleasure writing this and an honor to be apart of your contests as always. Love to always, Gail
  1. Date: 2/25/2012 8:30:00 AM

    Thank you for supporting my Bunny Rabbit contest Gail. Have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol

    Doyle Avatar Gail Angel Doyle
    Date: 2/25/2012 9:37:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    You also have a wonderful weekend as well. I enjoyed writing for your contest. Hugs with love always, Gail
  1. Date: 2/24/2012 3:55:00 PM

    This most be one of the cutest and sweetest I`ve been reading for quite some time,Gail:) Beautiful and with a unique,nice rhyming flow to it.Great write my dear friend! Hugsss and all my best wishes over at Carols`:)Arild

    Doyle Avatar Gail Angel Doyle
    Date: 2/24/2012 5:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Aw thank you so much Arild. I don't know how I pulled this off but I guess I did. LOL. Hugs always, Gail