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Losing The Way

Walking the straight path,
Tracks aligned, perfect symmetry.
Lifeless, soulless,
Limping in reality.

As an empty canister,
In the heart of a gale;
Swayed by every nudge, 
Trashed by every gush.

Within, that cunning confidence,
Deceiving blissfully. 
That senseless fool,
Believing indefinitely. 

Step by step
The soul disconnects.
This hollow frame,
Dissolving, decaying…losing the way.

-Titus Loh-

http://after-tim.blogspot.com

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  1. Date: 2/24/2012 9:10:00 AM

    The soul nests in the swabs of earth and the abundance of heaven, love and light, vie Thank you for stopping by my poetry, your comment meant much to me.

    Loh Avatar Titus Loh Date: 2/27/2012 10:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Always my pleasure, Vie. Your work is inspiring. Hope to hear from you more! Titus
  1. Date: 2/24/2012 6:38:00 AM

    Early morning reading to get the mind buzzing. Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry Titus. Have a fabulous weekend and I hope to see more of your poetry when I get back to the Soup Monday. Usually pretty busy on the weekends with family so don't get to read much. Love, Carol

    Loh Avatar Titus Loh Date: 2/27/2012 10:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Glad it made your morning better and not worse! Thanks Carol.