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  1. Date: 3/3/2012 2:58:00 PM
    Charma, Delicate like a baby's breath and just as sweet !!! I will be back to read this many times .Wonderful poem enjoyed it .Going to my favs, Anne

  1. Date: 2/25/2012 4:23:00 PM
    Only you can write like this Charmaine. If I put an artists easel with oils, you would do exactly the same. More smiles, and deserved :) xxxx

    Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop
    Date: 2/27/2012 3:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Just don't trust me with the canvas..I'll create an abstract disaster :)hehe.Thanks for your supporting kind words-Charma
  1. Date: 2/24/2012 10:00:00 AM
    Sweet friend, this is such a lovely poem. I can see your gentle heart, innocence and love for children in this stunning, descriptive verse. Beautiful work, my friend. Hope life is being good to you. Love you, Carolyn

    Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop
    Date: 2/27/2012 3:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    How are you dear Car?,just seeing your comment in my inbox brings a warm smile which brightens my heart.How is your health?Take good care of yourself..I'm doing quite well dear..You're always in my prayers..want you to know that-Hugs
  1. Date: 2/22/2012 5:05:00 AM
    Sounds like poetic heaven to me. Great job

    Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop
    Date: 2/22/2012 5:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks for reading my humble heaven kevin :)
  1. Date: 2/21/2012 1:25:00 PM
    charma, you know this is beautiful... i like the rain... it takes me to a different world..nobody can feel but me..i guess we all have that special place..when needed... everything about your poem is wonderful. especially the deep ending... always..pd

    Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop
    Date: 2/22/2012 1:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks so much Pd for your kind words and support-Charma
  1. Date: 2/21/2012 11:54:00 AM
    Can't help but smile as I read this-- I think we all do have this escape, Charma and you've written about it in such an endearing manner that I can't help but want to go read a fairy tale :) Enjoyed this one :D --let the music play on and thanks so much for dropping by with your heartwarming comments, I hope your nausea goes away soon... prayers and hugs to you!!

    Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop
    Date: 2/22/2012 1:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks so much Nikko.We can read Enyd Blyton anytime lol :)
  1. Date: 2/21/2012 9:39:00 AM
    Smile ˜ I see that beautiful Ruben stopped by - He has such pretty eyes - Just like You - My Love, John!:) *

  1. Date: 2/21/2012 4:47:00 AM
    It's fantastic to "read" you again! Beautiful!You have style, young Lady! To my Favs! Ruben.

    O. Avatar Ruben O.
    Date: 2/22/2012 11:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Come on, John! This is not nice! You should have known better than to write that kind of comment! You've always been respectful and you behaved like a gentleman...What's wrong now? Erase that stupid comment; Charmaine doesn't deserve it.
    Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop
    Date: 2/22/2012 12:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    John,remove this absurd dirty reply.I don't accept anymore comments like these.If you want to say such words say such words about women in your family but not about me.You've crossed the limit now.I can't remove it myself so you better find a way to remove it yourself,and stop your imagination.We come here to write and share our talent-Charma
    Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop
    Date: 2/22/2012 12:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks for reading Ruben and for adding it to your favourites.
    O. Avatar Ruben O.
    Date: 2/22/2012 12:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    HIP!! : )
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    Date: 2/21/2012 10:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    ‡ ... "Peeping through the curtains as she played bare the piano * While an owl began to hoot outside; tapping on the window * Twas sweet Charmaine, pressing her breast unto the glass * Covered in strawberry cream with girls licking their dreams * Startled I dashed to find myself naked in the middle of the room * Surrounded by puppies snuggling close; lying atop the flooor and dinner was served." ... ‡
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    Date: 2/21/2012 9:43:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Smile ˜ Yep, that's it sweeet Ruby - Six three six - Ummmm - Love, John!:) *
  1. Date: 2/20/2012 8:54:00 PM
    a lovely escape .. your words are mine Charma sweet friend.. such beauty so rare and so delicate .. your creative vision leaves one breathless .. a new fav for the "Sweetheart"..thankxxx luv..

    Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop
    Date: 2/21/2012 4:01:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    AWWWWWWW :) Thanks for the favourite Linda,Now i'm being spoiled :).Thanks for being supportive to my humble simple verse :),and thanks Ron for helping Linda so we can still enjoy her beautiful poetry-Charma
  1. Date: 2/20/2012 6:46:00 PM
    such an escape this was for the few moments that i read it. i was there next to the porch with you looking at the clouds, thinking heaven, as our weather stayes relativly warm and not cold this winter. and thats when carriages become warm days. and dwarfs they are the days off to enjoy the weather.

    Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop
    Date: 2/21/2012 4:03:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Yes an escape to my fantasy land.I love how you described carriages as warm days,and dwarfs as our days off..I wish there were more dwarfs :).Thanks for your support-Charma
  1. Date: 2/20/2012 4:11:00 PM
    I love any piece on rain. But yours stands tall in front of the line. I love it. Luv Michael

    Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop
    Date: 2/21/2012 3:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Aw that's a very nice comment re my humble verse Michael,Much appreciated,thanks-Charma
  1. Date: 2/20/2012 3:30:00 PM
    Charma, this would make a cute little book with pictures! children could really enjoy seeing that. How are you? Feeling excited these days?

    Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop
    Date: 2/21/2012 3:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hey dear,how am i feeling,Nausetic ,Nausetic and Nausetic :)lol... but On the other hand good and happy in waiting :).Thanks for your kind comments re my humble verse and hope you are fine too dear-Charma
  1. Date: 2/20/2012 2:19:00 PM
    Like the memories of a child, an adult child. I love poems that are somewhat childlike, have written many, many. This poem is charming and cannot help but create wonderful images. LOve, daver

    Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop
    Date: 2/21/2012 3:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I will always be an adult child,even when i'm 96 Daver :),cos what's the use in growing up,when children act so beautiful..thanks for reading my friend-Charma
  1. Date: 2/20/2012 2:02:00 PM
    A beautiful poem Charmaine , enjoyed my read today , best wishes , Declan ...

    Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop
    Date: 2/21/2012 3:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks so much Declan
  1. Date: 2/20/2012 12:22:00 PM
    Beautiful poem! I enjoyed every word of it.

    Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop
    Date: 2/21/2012 3:54:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks so much,am glad Shirley :)
  1. Date: 2/20/2012 11:42:00 AM
    Your poetry is a treat for the heart, enjoyed every word my dear, love and light, vie

    Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop
    Date: 2/21/2012 3:54:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks so much sweet lady :)