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Piano notes

                                                 ``


                                         Night deepens
 
                                         with the piano notes.

                                         Candle melts yellow...



                                                    ~



                           For  Destroyer ~ Poet's "Favorite or Best Haiku" Contest                                    

                            Written by gautami phookan

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    Carol Sunshine Brown
    Date: 4/19/2012 11:42:00 AM
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    Stopping by to say Thank You for your kind comments on my poetry Gautami. It is a pleasure to read your writings. Have a wonderful day. Love, Carol
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    Sara Kendrick
    Date: 3/23/2012 2:57:00 PM
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    I liked this one when read before..Congrats on your win..Sara
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    Gwendolen R.
    Date: 3/22/2012 7:00:00 PM
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    Hi busy lady!! :) :0 :O 3 smiley faces for this divine win! A great haiku and a great win! Love, Gwendolen
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    yasmin khan
    Date: 3/22/2012 4:32:00 AM
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    beautifully written haiku GAUTI,congrads on a well deserved win.
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    Kim Merryman
    Date: 3/21/2012 3:39:00 PM
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    Congrats on your win, Gautami! Love, Kim
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    Joann Grisetti
    Date: 3/21/2012 12:50:00 PM
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    Congratulations of your place in the contest with a nicely written poem.
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    Carol Sunshine Brown
    Date: 3/19/2012 6:03:00 AM
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    Congratulations on your placement in P.D.'s "Haiku" contest Gautami. Love, Carol
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 3/18/2012 5:00:00 PM
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    Hey, did you enter this in PD's same time as Linda's . A big double win for you And it really deserves it. Congrats.
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 3/17/2012 5:42:00 PM
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    BIg congrats in LInda's contest, I sure remember this cool haiku!
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    Linda-Marie SweetHeart
    Date: 3/16/2012 8:30:00 PM
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    congrats Gautami on an awesome win for these splendid words luv..
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    Joyce Johnson
    Date: 3/16/2012 5:46:00 PM
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    lthis is a great haiku. congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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    Charlotte Puddifoot
    Date: 3/16/2012 5:28:00 PM
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    congrats on your win in the contest; this is a beautifully written haiku :-)
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    RALPH TAYLOR
    Date: 3/16/2012 7:58:00 AM
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    Congrats on your win, Gautami. Excellent. Nice going. Ralph
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    Ruben O.
    Date: 3/16/2012 12:40:00 AM
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    Congratulations on your big win in PD's Contest, Gautami! Ruben.
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    Poet Destroyer A
    Date: 3/15/2012 10:45:00 PM
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    G.P.~.Congratulations ;-) THANK YOU FOR SUPPORTING ;-) my contest... Enjoyed your entry,~ always*PD
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    Sara Kendrick
    Date: 3/3/2012 5:14:00 AM
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    Romantic but very subtle..Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for stopping by...Sara
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    Gwendolen R.
    Date: 2/23/2012 3:44:00 AM
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    GO TO MEMBER AREA....THEN CLICK ON...POST A NEW BLOG...you are a member, therefore this option should work for you...I'll be waiting to see if it works for ya...Where would you like to meet to have an evening serenade by the crickets amidst our red paper lanterns?....A divine proposal!! Count me in!! This haiku has a strong juxtopo. When I was a lil girl we used to have a grand piano and a musician would play the piano as my dad read the poetry of the greats...aww..the candles burned as he read on thru the night! :)

    R. Avatar Gwendolen R. Date: 2/23/2012 3:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    This really took me back to my youth! :)
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 2/21/2012 7:41:00 PM
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    Gautami, I am so happy you liked my rondelet. I worked about three hours on that thing!!!
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 2/20/2012 4:30:00 PM
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    by gosh, I think you got it!!!! GREAT haiku.
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    kash poet
    Date: 2/20/2012 1:06:00 PM
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    Very nice images you have captured in this haiku Gautami.Love it!
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    Poet Destroyer A
    Date: 2/20/2012 9:00:00 AM
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    cool haiku
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    Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
    Date: 2/19/2012 10:38:00 PM
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    Beautiful haiku. What an image you paint. If it's for the juxtaposition contest, I think it's a contender! Blessings, Rhonda