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Winter Walks

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Winter Walks


                                Winter walks,
                                   on summer beaches,
                                 but for you and I.
                                 Marking our steps 
                                        in soft sand,
                                  that soon,
                                 the tide must wash away.
                                 
                                    

                                  Months from now,
                                     our walks will have been
                                   forgotten.

                                 Beaches crowded with bodies dressed,
                                     in summer styles.
                                   We will have become
                                        last years news.

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  1. Date: 2/19/2012 9:15:00 PM

    I really enjoyed your poem Tucker, loved the change from winter scene to summer scene, love,vie

    Carwile Jr Avatar Tucker Carwile Jr Date: 2/20/2012 7:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    vie, how great it is to get such great comments on something I love to do........tucker
  1. Date: 2/19/2012 5:55:00 PM

    Nice poem, I enjoyed reading it.

  1. Date: 2/19/2012 4:30:00 PM

    I really like this, "last years news" is a great line. I think I might like it better if the form wasnt all over the place...just me. Glad to meet you. , looking forward to reading more of your work. BG

    Carwile Jr Avatar Tucker Carwile Jr Date: 2/19/2012 5:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    BG, thank you so much for your comments......tucker
  1. Date: 2/19/2012 4:12:00 PM

    Nicely done Tucker.....summer,soft sand and sunshine(love).....lovely. -oxox Anne-Lise

    Carwile Jr Avatar Tucker Carwile Jr Date: 2/19/2012 5:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Anne-Lise, thank you so very much on your comment.............tucker