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Spice

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Below is the poem entitled Spice which was written by poet Patrick Cornwall. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Spice

He woke with hope and love for the new day

And darkness met him and betrayed

The hope vanished but brought  cleansing

And like the  soldier onto  knee bending

 

If You are there help me like a bottle of wine

A slight burn and You grow and deny

 

It was only one time and her heart lies

Spelled it out and written by

He was there between each adjective

That holy love linked each conjunctive

 

If You came with your advice

Her love cost more and price

 

In front of the screen he touched the keys

Writing the note with hope  relieves

But she has deleted his record and moved over

In a seedy hotel they meet and my love choked her

 

You told me once You told me twice

My love was cooked with bitter spice


Dedicated to Poetry Soupers All

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  1. Date: 6/11/2012 4:35:00 AM
    This is great... I really enjoyed it. Nice to get such a blessing in such a beautiful monday afternoon.

  1. Date: 2/20/2012 3:39:00 PM
    hehehe you picked a fine time to leave me Maureen? love it mate, the bitter spice...

  1. Date: 2/19/2012 6:18:00 PM
    Interesting work..Very expressive and descriptive..Thanks for stopping by..I am glad that Haiku now rings a bell for you..I hope that you will become an expert in writing them...Your comments were uplifting..Sara

  1. Date: 2/19/2012 12:41:00 PM
    great dedication to the poetry soupers ~always p.d.

  1. Date: 2/19/2012 9:16:00 AM
    You have been writing so much lately! Your heart is pouring itself out like water..gosh, that's got to be one refreshing write! Don't stop! We will continue to read more....Once a writer told me to write until the well runs dry, then write some more at the first drop of inspiration. Write about anything...a bug on the wall, the way someone holds his coffee cup,...just write. Have a wonderful Sunday!! Gwendolen

  1. Date: 2/19/2012 8:57:00 AM
    Many a relationship ends up like Bitter Spice, I recently lived it. Fine dedication to the Soupers all Patrick :)