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Feeling Rhyme

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Feeling Rhyme

Everything about you so desirable, you command attention, I find myself wanting you, though that wasn't my intention. Eyes, nose, hair, so well aligned you need no correction, It's embedded in my heart to stare in your direction. When you look me in the eyes, I know you feel this connection, I wanna be alone with you, so you can truly feel affection. Even your speech is eloquent, from grammar to diction, We need to be together with no restriction. If there's another in your life, I'd recommend immediate eviction, Because compared to what I have in store, he's just a constriction. When we arrive in our intimate zone, there'll be no intrusion, It will all be true feeling, you'll feel it's no illusion. I don't make idle promises, I don't do silly delusions, I've explained my feelings, this is my conclusion. -Michael-Shane Brown

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  1. Date: 2/18/2012 4:56:00 PM
    Enjoyed reading your passionate work this eve..Lucky lady who gets the romantic work from you...Sara