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The Tower

Far above those lofty clouds In a tower in the sky, Distanced from the noisy crowds, And protected from the Lie. The spire shines and blazes, A beacon for all who hope. At the bottom are crimson mazes, And the stillness of a rope. The glass halts any force, But is becoming close to brittle. Each hit it takes, it cracks, of course. And shards fall little by little. This opening that now exists Drops me now to the abyss.

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  1. Date: 2/25/2012 4:39:00 PM

    Oh Danny please please look after you, you are cared about by so many including myself. Hugs Lizzie

  1. Date: 2/19/2012 4:00:00 PM

    Well written poem, I enjoyed reading it. :)

  1. Date: 2/19/2012 6:51:00 AM

    Very well written Danny,touching lines. - oxox Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 2/16/2012 9:26:00 PM

    You are describing a disturbing dream in vivid detail while using appropriate rhyming. This is a decent write.