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Crying In The Rain

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Crying In The Rain

Crying in the rain
Letting go of all this pain
I do not want to see again
How we came crashing to an end
I do not want to see why
We were forced to say good bye
I have watched it and I have lived it
Been crushed by such a low hit
I’m crying in this rain
My eyes red with raw pain
The tears are flowing
Just not going
And I’m left all alone
I beg for your forgiveness
I scream with all I’ve got
But when it comes together
What I have is not a lot
I walk alone down this street
Strangers’ eyes are following
But I just keep on walking
Head down and never slowing
I pace these roads and hope to find
Something that means anything
Something that’s familiar
Until then I’m just left hanging
I’m still crying in this town
The rain pours on my face
Trying to forget you
But failing at first base
I cannot help but remember
Your face and how you smile
Just keep walking strong
It might be easier after a mile
Your eyes and how they glowed
Are burnt into my mind
I close my eyes and see them
Staring back right into mine
I’m crying on this night
And will on many more to come
I’ll stumble forward without you
Looking for my fortune
I cannot ever forget
The feeling that I had
When you put your arms around me
And chased away all the sad
I will try but fail to forget
How you loved me through thick and thin
I will wander through my life
But always still in love with him
He was my world and I can’t forget
He makes me who I am
Although he’s gone and lost from sight
I will not become a sham
I will always try to forget
How brilliant he made me feel
Made the world seem wonderful
And that maybe this world was real
The pain I feel when I remember him
Is cutting deeper still
He’s left a gaping hole in me
One that no one could ever fill
I try and try and fail again
My baby is still gone
I’m crying in this rain again
Cold and all alone

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  1. Date: 2/20/2012 10:17:00 AM

    You jump from YOU to HIM, but I guess they are the same guy? I do that sometimes in my own poetry and songs. Then I notice your line "I walk alone down this street Strangers’ eyes are following But I just keep on walking Head down and never slowing I pace these roads and hope to find Something that means anything..." indicating a confused person not ready to seriously look for something to repllace the hurt of her past. Interesting poem, I like it. Ronnie

  1. Date: 2/17/2012 4:34:00 AM

    Very well written Sev,I like yours poem alot. oxox love Anne-Lise

    Smith Avatar Sev Smith Date: 2/17/2012 4:37:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so much Love :) I'm glad you like them xxx