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Shine

You walked in my dreams
 my feet are off the ground 
Floating into you"re arms
 A touch so calm
 With love in you're heart
 Your soul will shine
 in mine. 

Dawn Mclaughlin @Dawn 2012

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  1. Date: 2/17/2012 7:07:00 AM
    very beautiful. typo: you're means you are, so it should be your, not being critical, just thought you should see that. Missed your writing there a bit, Cindy

  1. Date: 2/16/2012 4:51:00 PM
    Beautiful poem, Dawn. Enjoyed! Hugs, Catie :)