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Unwavering Value


Even the tiniest speckle of dust 
cannot conceal the clout- 
of the golden surface it rests on. 

So like that golden throne,
Don’t let the tiniest of problems
Conceal your true identity.

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  1. Date: 3/22/2013 12:39:00 AM

    Words to live by! Liked how you expressed yourself in this... our hands get dirty, we stub our toes, we get many cuts and scrapes... but why should that define you? You were made beautiful in God's image... great message!

  1. Date: 2/26/2012 2:51:00 PM

    It's brilliance, when few words can paint a pic

  1. Date: 2/20/2012 4:06:00 AM

    Yes Our identity is what makes us who we are,its a posession we can't afford to loose.Nice to see your poetry once again Raul-Charma

  1. Date: 2/18/2012 5:42:00 PM

    Wise lines to share Raul,very well done. - oxox Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 2/17/2012 12:10:00 PM

    Yo estoy muy bien! How are you? Our identity is all...nicely done, my friend. Ruben.

  1. Date: 2/17/2012 11:55:00 AM

    Good advice in only two short verses. This tiniest of poems is a good one.

  1. Date: 2/16/2012 6:56:00 PM

    Hello, Sensei ; Raul I am so glad to see your post " Unwavering Value " It has been a long Eternity, since last we Spoke Welcome back I hope YOU are here for Awhile In this Universe I am "the tiniest speckle of dust" Superb I have to go see doctors go to Hospital almost everyday I will soup mail YOU early Sunday Stay Healthy, Live Prosperous and LOVE GOD With LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Liege...Harry ( HG )

  1. Date: 2/16/2012 1:53:00 PM

    Very wise! Very nice!

  1. Date: 2/16/2012 1:25:00 PM

    Excellent advice! Lovely poem, Raul. Hugs, Catie :)