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I Want My Alone Time

 I want my alone time, just you and I
dont care if no one even come by.
I want my alone time the way it used to be,
noone but you and me. 

I want my alone time without any interruptions,
We need no introduction, only you and me, this is
the way I want it to be,

I want my alone time and need it now,
We do not need anyone to show us how.
Just You for Me and Me for You
we both know exactly what to do!

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  1. Date: 5/14/2012 10:30:00 AM

    (: I love this and def understand the NEED to be alone, like old times with the one you love.

  1. Date: 5/10/2012 9:49:00 AM

    Wow, don't we all. Thank you for sharing.

  1. Date: 5/4/2012 5:35:00 PM

    Love this...we just need that time alone

  1. Date: 4/20/2012 7:41:00 PM

    Awesome! Really enjoyed it.=) Sign, Anya

  1. Date: 4/9/2012 6:12:00 PM

    typo 4th line... love your verse babe all the time... good one ...

  1. Date: 4/5/2012 8:20:00 PM

    okok i'll send out the message right now. leave me alone for the next two hours.

  1. Date: 4/5/2012 1:58:00 AM

    steal away into the night, as two lovers take flight. Love's flame your heart ignites and I must say this a great write. Goodnight- JH

  1. Date: 3/27/2012 3:53:00 PM

    Alone together, now aint that nice. A nest to feather, don't you think twice. Just steal away to paridise. Two souls casting their luck with the roll of the dice.

  1. Date: 3/27/2012 6:48:00 AM

    sounds so nice....haven't had any lately.

  1. Date: 3/24/2012 11:23:00 AM

    Sounds like you have kids...LOL No, it was wwell written and your emotions show beautifully.

  1. Date: 3/14/2012 11:19:00 PM

    great image of the happy two, great sounding be you happy too... orright..

  1. Date: 3/11/2012 7:28:00 AM

    Thanks for your comments and the wonderful poems you write! JP

  1. Date: 3/10/2012 7:42:00 PM

    feeling deep emotion in this write Shirley.. sweet expressions of luv..alone time is precious..luv..

  1. Date: 2/28/2012 2:55:00 PM

    you hit it right on the head, thanks for posting this. Thanks for reading my poem and the lovely comments

  1. Date: 2/27/2012 4:17:00 PM

    this sounds like it belongs to someone.

  1. Date: 2/26/2012 11:04:00 AM

    In a world where "connectedness" seems focused outside of primary relationships, thoughts like this serve to remind that connectedness begins at home. Delightful write! - Chuck

  1. Date: 2/25/2012 12:50:00 PM

    All needs like you. This is very sweet time, loved and thanks for your comment, loved, bl

  1. Date: 2/24/2012 3:07:00 PM

    Enjoyed reading your work this afternoon..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and taking time to comment on my work..Sara

  1. Date: 2/24/2012 4:12:00 AM

    Very passionate write by you.Enjoyed the read.Thanks for your kind comment at my poem.

  1. Date: 2/23/2012 5:13:00 AM

    Thanks Shirley for your kind comment re my poem. God bless, Maureen

  1. Date: 2/22/2012 5:34:00 PM

    I so understand this....I think all couples and individuals need alone time.

  1. Date: 2/22/2012 2:02:00 PM

    I believe we all need to have this moment. Sadly, not all of get this chance to share our time alone. Makes you think Shirley :)

  1. Date: 2/22/2012 10:45:00 AM

    thanks for your kind comments you poem here is delightful and spurs a memory. very good from a fellow poet to you. keep the juices and the pen flowing it helps a lot of people in different ways, thanks to God this site is here for all of us, God bless bob

  1. Date: 2/21/2012 8:04:00 PM

    Shirley, i need alone time always.. but, being a mother... i can't find the time... everything i do has eye's on it... i want my alone time now!!! ,.. Thank you for sharing your wonderful poem with us. Have yourself a good night, always* PD

  1. Date: 2/20/2012 2:05:00 PM

    Such a lovely read Shirley and when your in love who needs a crowd :) Hugs and best wishes , Declan xx

  1. Date: 2/20/2012 1:08:00 PM

    A lovely and heartfelt expressed poem.thanks for sharing it.God bless you. Hugs!Erich

  1. Date: 2/20/2012 1:03:00 PM

    Shirley a nice read, and a good dedication, thanks for your comments..hope you have entered my contest..David

  1. Date: 2/19/2012 11:22:00 PM

    A lovely, expressive poem Shirley, I enjoyed reading. :)

  1. Date: 2/17/2012 5:27:00 PM

    Sweet expressions of that special time between tow people.

  1. Date: 2/17/2012 3:03:00 PM

    Lovely piece indeed, Shirley. I know just how you feel

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