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Empty Mirror

Empty Mirror

I want no trouble,
I see nothing,
Is anyone there?


Empty & Hollow.
Easy to break,
No longer sad. 

Invisible beauty,
Can't feel a thing.
Is anyone there?


by;pd

Happy Valentine's.... xox~

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  1. Date: 12/15/2013 7:05:00 PM

    Intensely relatable...I wrote something similar to this a long time ago called "the man in the mirror"...I love pieces like this, about struggling with identity or your "place" in the world. This is very powerful, in all it's simplicity...well done

  1. Date: 12/1/2013 3:45:00 AM

    Hi, my everdearest sis! I'm so glad I found this very precious gem of yours through this winners list ;) This is an excellent heartfelt write that many of us can relate. A very brilliant & great write indeed. Embracing it tight. To my FAVE. My biggest hearty congratulations on your well-deserved win! Cheers and biggest hugs! My honor for sharing this win w/ U &w/ the others. I didn't expect mine will be included ... idea popped up the last day. Big hugs again! Tcare. God bless! lovem4evrLeo

  1. Date: 11/30/2013 9:39:00 PM

    PD, you chose a really great entry for the contest. it's good to see these again. I really don't remember this one but I am sure I must have seen it. I bet I've seen all your poems! Congrats on the well deserved win.

  1. Date: 11/30/2013 9:39:00 PM

    HOw was your thanksgiving? I had a great time at my son's!

  1. Date: 11/30/2013 6:27:00 PM

    Deep. I read this over a few times. Very relatable. Congrats, PD!

  1. Date: 11/30/2013 10:11:00 AM

    Nice win Linda, I can't wait to see your next poem.....Roger

  1. Date: 11/29/2013 1:43:00 PM

    Linda, congrats--so much below the surface here!

  1. Date: 11/29/2013 4:56:00 AM

    Congrats on the win, P.D

  1. Date: 11/24/2013 1:39:00 PM

    Linda This write is emotional and sentimental. Sometimes we all seem invisible and sad and just want to be noticed and not feel lonely anymore. Very deep words. Nice job my friend Thanks for the wonderful comment on my Rumors poem Hugs

  1. Date: 9/5/2013 4:51:00 PM

    I have always had trouble with self identity. How I look on the outside, does not reflect who I am on the inside. I wish my true self was easier to see!...A very deep poem, Linda. I really enjoyed reading it!....You might like my new poem titled, "Dark Angel". It deals with the same subject of self identity.

  1. Date: 2/16/2013 7:38:00 PM

    Oooooh! I really like this one!!! What cannot be seen is to be written--a very reflective piece. Always, Laura

  1. Date: 2/12/2013 12:25:00 PM

    I really like this poem, well written. GypsyofEssence

  1. Date: 12/12/2012 9:54:00 AM

    Must be a vampire huh? haha...but very deep meaning,had to read twice to fully understand.Bravo

  1. Date: 11/25/2012 10:20:00 PM

    Very deep indeed Pd, how long did you stare? Lol, blessings, Carl

  1. Date: 9/17/2012 8:16:00 AM

    Lines with great meaning Pd, loved it. Great work as usual. Many thanks for your inspiring comments. You keep me going.

  1. Date: 8/14/2012 4:42:00 PM

    Strong title+strong poem=tough poem. Lol. Nice work. Kingfemi.

  1. Date: 7/13/2012 6:45:00 PM

    Hey beautiful Just saying hi. Miss u. Hugs n luv Michael

  1. Date: 7/1/2012 8:34:00 AM

    This is heartfelt all the way...it sort of takes your breath away..like a mini roller coaster ride..lol..enjoyed this one.

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 5:27:00 PM

    Destroyer Is there truly ever anyone there , I too want no trouble and can not feel a thing, So too do I tell myself, but in life mirrors burn like hell that is the trouble, On the periphery of lifes bubble. Nite nite god bless peace is out there.

  1. Date: 5/23/2012 8:24:00 AM

    Love it PD ... can feel the beat :)

  1. Date: 5/10/2012 10:13:00 PM

    A cool piece, pd! ...has me scratchin' my head, but I like it! Best wishes, Keith

  1. Date: 5/8/2012 7:47:00 AM

    unfortunately there isn't a mirror mirror on the wall to tell us we are the fairest of them all when we need it! the sound of silence can be deafening...

  1. Date: 5/5/2012 7:31:00 PM

    This is some poem. The invisible beauty only few people can see it. Sometimes we look but we can't see. Thanks for sharing this with us. Lucilla

  1. Date: 4/30/2012 8:09:00 PM

    if no one is there... who will answer? Yes someone is there and she is here with us. Hello PD. good to read your poetry this evening and thank you so much for your comments my friend. I do apprecdiate them

  1. Date: 4/30/2012 5:35:00 AM

    I had missed this precious Gem my friend. So deep so lovely and so intriguing a write revealing the often faced reality of life, which often get clear when we stand before the mirror and feel so empty sometimes. The last line ask a lot more than the? mark. Great one from you amazing pen and thank you for your precious words on my series Poem and finding it interesting. Love and best wishes always....Ravindra....Poet .D

  1. Date: 3/11/2012 9:03:00 AM

    This is exactly how I feel when I am alone and sad and there seems to be no one in the mirror but tears.

  1. Date: 3/6/2012 2:42:00 PM

    This poem reminded me slightly of the song Breathe No More by Evanescence. That tune went through my mind as I read this amazing poem. Very awesome. ~Laura

  1. Date: 3/3/2012 10:50:00 AM

    I think this is THE most read poem on the soup, WOW!!! That is amazing, PD!! Love poetry that asks questions of the reader! Great write for you...thanks for stopping over to my place...always great to hear from you...Hope u are not working too hard, young lady!....Unscathed by the deadly tornadoes yesterday. We are very blessed! Gwendolen

  1. Date: 3/2/2012 6:29:00 PM

    this reminds me of my most-anticipated movie this year, Snow White! love it PD

  1. Date: 2/26/2012 11:15:00 AM

    Being as my mirror reflects, I get this. Thank you. - Chuck

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