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About This Poem

Empty Mirror

Empty Mirror

I want no trouble,
I see nothing,
Is anyone there?


Empty & Hollow.
Easy to break,
No longer sad. 

Invisible beauty,
Can't feel a thing.
Is anyone there?


by;pd

Happy Valentine's.... xox~

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  1. Breidenthal Avatar
    Laura Breidenthal
    Date: 2/16/2013 7:38:00 PM
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    Oooooh! I really like this one!!! What cannot be seen is to be written--a very reflective piece. Always, Laura
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    Gypsyof Essence
    Date: 2/12/2013 12:25:00 PM
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    I really like this poem, well written. GypsyofEssence
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    Anna J Carroll
    Date: 12/12/2012 9:54:00 AM
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    Must be a vampire huh? haha...but very deep meaning,had to read twice to fully understand.Bravo
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    Carl Fraser
    Date: 11/25/2012 10:20:00 PM
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    Very deep indeed Pd, how long did you stare? Lol, blessings, Carl
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    Yesha Shah
    Date: 9/17/2012 8:16:00 AM
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    Lines with great meaning Pd, loved it. Great work as usual. Many thanks for your inspiring comments. You keep me going.
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    femi joey oloidi
    Date: 8/14/2012 4:42:00 PM
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    Strong title+strong poem=tough poem. Lol. Nice work. Kingfemi.
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    Michael J. Falotico
    Date: 7/13/2012 6:45:00 PM
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    Hey beautiful Just saying hi. Miss u. Hugs n luv Michael
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    Pace INK-U-SCRIPT
    Date: 7/1/2012 8:34:00 AM
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    This is heartfelt all the way...it sort of takes your breath away..like a mini roller coaster ride..lol..enjoyed this one.
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    Christopher Flaherty
    Date: 6/22/2012 5:27:00 PM
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    Destroyer Is there truly ever anyone there , I too want no trouble and can not feel a thing, So too do I tell myself, but in life mirrors burn like hell that is the trouble, On the periphery of lifes bubble. Nite nite god bless peace is out there.
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    isa mahrie
    Date: 5/23/2012 8:24:00 AM
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    Love it PD ... can feel the beat :)
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    Keith Bickerstaffe
    Date: 5/10/2012 10:13:00 PM
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    A cool piece, pd! ...has me scratchin' my head, but I like it! Best wishes, Keith
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    Black Eyed Susan
    Date: 5/8/2012 7:47:00 AM
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    unfortunately there isn't a mirror mirror on the wall to tell us we are the fairest of them all when we need it! the sound of silence can be deafening...
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    Lucilla Carrillo
    Date: 5/5/2012 7:31:00 PM
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    This is some poem. The invisible beauty only few people can see it. Sometimes we look but we can't see. Thanks for sharing this with us. Lucilla
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    Robert A. Dufresne
    Date: 4/30/2012 8:09:00 PM
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    if no one is there... who will answer? Yes someone is there and she is here with us. Hello PD. good to read your poetry this evening and thank you so much for your comments my friend. I do apprecdiate them
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    Ravindra K Kapoor
    Date: 4/30/2012 5:35:00 AM
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    I had missed this precious Gem my friend. So deep so lovely and so intriguing a write revealing the often faced reality of life, which often get clear when we stand before the mirror and feel so empty sometimes. The last line ask a lot more than the? mark. Great one from you amazing pen and thank you for your precious words on my series Poem and finding it interesting. Love and best wishes always....Ravindra....Poet .D
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    Joann Grisetti
    Date: 3/11/2012 9:03:00 AM
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    This is exactly how I feel when I am alone and sad and there seems to be no one in the mirror but tears.
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    Laura Breidenthal
    Date: 3/6/2012 2:42:00 PM
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    This poem reminded me slightly of the song Breathe No More by Evanescence. That tune went through my mind as I read this amazing poem. Very awesome. ~Laura
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    Gwendolen R.
    Date: 3/3/2012 10:50:00 AM
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    I think this is THE most read poem on the soup, WOW!!! That is amazing, PD!! Love poetry that asks questions of the reader! Great write for you...thanks for stopping over to my place...always great to hear from you...Hope u are not working too hard, young lady!....Unscathed by the deadly tornadoes yesterday. We are very blessed! Gwendolen
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    M.I.A .
    Date: 3/2/2012 6:29:00 PM
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    this reminds me of my most-anticipated movie this year, Snow White! love it PD
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    Chuck Novotny
    Date: 2/26/2012 11:15:00 AM
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    Being as my mirror reflects, I get this. Thank you. - Chuck
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    POETESS DARKLY
    Date: 2/25/2012 10:25:00 PM
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    wow this one got my attention! great job pd.
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    FABIYAS M V
    Date: 2/25/2012 9:05:00 PM
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    Just an empty mirror...........but hundreds of thoughts........Thank you for placing me among the winners,PD
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    jack horne
    Date: 2/25/2012 12:20:00 PM
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    Intriguing write, PD. Hope you're having a great weekend xx
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    Dinda Minardi
    Date: 2/25/2012 9:47:00 AM
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    In my opinion, this poem about someone who doesn't like her own look / life. Thanks for the placement on your contest, dearest :)
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    Linda-Marie SweetHeart
    Date: 2/25/2012 9:45:00 AM
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    HELLO PD MY BFF .. WELL HOPE i MET YOUR CHALLENGE LUV.. THOUGH rON IS "THE ONE" ..U ASKED FOR FIRST KISS AND THAT WAS MY EX.. OH.. ACTUALLY MY FIRST KISS WAS IIN KINTERGARDEN.. MY BAD GIRL.. JUST GREW..HAJA.. LUV BFF FOR LIFE...
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    M. Hussain Effendi
    Date: 2/25/2012 5:28:00 AM
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    Spooky!? I think you posted this for the wrong occassion, correct me if I am mistaken...
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    Joe Maverick
    Date: 2/23/2012 11:45:00 PM
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    Well if its as bad as that ill give you a look in P D
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    Broken Butterfly
    Date: 2/23/2012 1:30:00 PM
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    Deep and haunting, Poet. Is anyone there? Thank you for my 3rd place, in your Any Poem This Week Contest with Beyond and Beneath. This was originally written for another contest and did not get placed so this makes placing in your contest very sweet. This is what is so wonderful about the contests you and Brian run. We are given another chance to soar.
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    HGarvey Daniel Esquire
    Date: 2/22/2012 11:52:00 PM
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    Dear PD, Excellent Poem Soup Mail Call with LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER, YOUR Liege...Harry
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    HGarvey Daniel Esquire
    Date: 2/22/2012 10:19:00 PM
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    Dear PD, " Invisible Beauty " YOU Speak not the Truth, if YOU are " No longer Sad Then Triump has Prevailed "Is anyone there?" Yes PD I am with LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER...Harry - With-in the next couple of days I will Write a new Blog concerning My Future Contest I Thank-YOU For YOUR Support, LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER, YOUR Liege...Harry ( HG ) WriteBlogMy 'Hodge-Podge Poetry
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