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Healing Salt

the wave rolled, moving the currents in the heart, dancing to the beating drum it came to die on your shores the salt to your chapped, dark fjords

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  1. Date: 2/14/2012 11:16:00 AM

    Caroline, I love the feel you have created with your Tanka.. The images swept me away in this beauty ;) hope your day has been a good one xoxo

  1. Date: 2/13/2012 11:15:00 AM

    Evocative poem. Have you ever seen fyords? Peace & Love Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 2/13/2012 9:31:00 AM

    mighty powerful lines of intensity and drams Caroline.. feeling the imagery here so well .. so nice to hear from u.. as u know by now have had sevdere hand surgery..lost two fingers on right hand..so my hubby is my typing piece for now.. in therapy three times a week in Rome.. as we live in Italy for now.. till I recuperate.. so lovely to read your impressive write luv..

  1. Date: 2/12/2012 9:56:00 PM

    Caroline,, I like the healing power salt has on the beach... ... Thank you for sharing your wonderful tanka. ;-) have your self a wonderful and fun Valentine's day~ xox~always..pd