THE DAYS IN A BOX OF CHOCOLATES by Laila Andresen Mjelde

Date: 5/2/2012 12:27:00 PM

Smile ˜ Sweeet Milk Chocolate, My Dear Precious Beautiful Laila * When I Was A Child On Halloween Night, I Would Seperate All My Chocolate From My Other Candy & Treats ˜ Stay Up Half The Night & Place What Was Left Aneath Pillow ˜ Smile, So That My Big Brother Wouldn't Steal Its Joys Away From Myself Afore I Awoke & Skipped School; Which Was The Rule In Place For The Baby Boys, Who Loved Their Sweet Chocolate * My Love, Forever; John!:) ˜sud3

Laila Andresen Mjelde Date: 5/4/2012 12:31:00 PM

Thank you for visit, "chocolateboy"! I mad about chocolate myself, so I understand you hiding them! oxox always Laila

Gail DeBole

Date: 2/15/2012 3:07:00 PM

Really like the ways you used the different kinds of chocolate to describe the days...excellent use of a simile. It implies that all of your days are good ones (especially if you like chocolate...and who doesn't?). (Thank you for reading my poem, and for the warm welcome to the soup.)

Laila Andresen Mjelde Date: 2/15/2012 11:26:00 PM

Thank you for reading Gail! Appreciate your feedback, always! You were all worth tho comments on your poem! oxoxo love Laila

Anne Lise Andresen

Date: 2/13/2012 1:21:00 PM

I will take them all Laila....I love chocolate!!! SWEET chocolate and poem!!!! UHU!!!love from mom.

Anne Lise Andresen Date: 2/14/2012 3:52:00 AM

O.K. only two???pleace!!!

Laila Andresen Mjelde Date: 2/14/2012 3:12:00 AM

Thank you for reading mum, but remember that not all fo ckocolates is good for you! oxoxo love Laila

Dan Kearley

Date: 2/13/2012 12:02:00 AM

:o) I got a little smile from this.I sat here thinking what could make it better?But I couldn't pick one..And now I'm hungry for chocolate! :o)

Laila Andresen Mjelde Date: 2/13/2012 1:03:00 AM

Thank you for reading Dan, always a pleasure to get comments from you. Grab a snickers and stop your hunger! oxoxo love Laila

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 2/12/2012 11:30:00 PM

Clever and clean as a whistle. Your spirited poem is almost tasty. Always, Laura

Laila Andresen Mjelde Date: 2/12/2012 11:34:00 PM

Thank you for reading my poem, but remember to brush! oxoxo love Laila

Mystic Rose

Date: 2/12/2012 7:02:00 PM

I went to store and bought me a box of pot of gold chocolates. I dug for a gold nugget but found didley squat, so I squished them all to see the soft and mushy ones and I found it, bingo, the squishy soft caramel ooze, now that's a caramel. Oh my dear as Tom Hanks the cute patutie said "Life is a box of chocolates, you never know what your going to get, " hope your smiling my love, vie

Laila Andresen Mjelde Date: 2/12/2012 11:31:00 PM

Thank you for reading my poem! It is important to take care of our teeth, if not it soon will be expensive! oxoxo love Laila

Jane Richer

Date: 2/12/2012 4:00:00 PM

Now this is a poem that I can really sink my teeth into, Laila. lol For me it would be double chocolate with sprinkles on it; chocolate cake, oh yeah with chocolate icing too. I have to keep my dentist wealthy! lol Love Jane

Laila Andresen Mjelde Date: 2/12/2012 11:33:00 PM

Thank you for reading, always good with chocolate, in even good times and bad times! oxoxo love Laila

Arild Andresen Ertsland

Date: 2/12/2012 3:07:00 PM

Give me the sweetest chocolate there is,Laila! The sweeter,the better:) Love,Arild

Laila Andresen Mjelde Date: 2/12/2012 3:38:00 PM

You have already got the sweetest chocolate there is, I call her mom! He he he oxoxo love Laila

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/12/2012 2:38:00 PM

mmmm.yes... chocolate... cute poem..always..pd

Laila Andresen Mjelde Date: 2/12/2012 3:36:00 PM

Thank you for reading me again, I'll celebrate with a chocolate! oxoxo love Laila

Gwendolen R.

Date: 2/12/2012 2:27:00 PM

Hmmm?...I think today would be a light chocolate with a raspberry center! This is a neat concept for a poem..I did hear that you are now a regular on the Soup,..I just didn't know how to spell your name..thanks for initiating a handshake to me by reading my latest...very nice of you, darling. Relating anything in this life to coffee or chocolate is really up my alley! An adrenaline junkie, I thrive on these things. Check your soup mail..Gwendolen

Laila Andresen Mjelde Date: 2/12/2012 3:37:00 PM

Thank you for nice words and your passion for chocolate is mutal! See you around! oxoxo love Laila

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