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haiku 20

tears fell
love up and left...
another door opened
For the contest of *P.D.* ~Your favorite or best HAIKU~ Written by: Carol Brown 5th Place Winner

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  1. Date: 3/21/2012 3:47:00 PM

    This is a good one, Carol. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 3/20/2012 10:53:00 PM

    Congrats Carol...Leila^_^

  1. Date: 3/19/2012 6:09:00 AM

    Thank you all for your comments and congrats. Have a lovely week. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 3/18/2012 5:04:00 PM

    I think this truly is one of your best, CArol. Big congrats in the contest.

  1. Date: 3/16/2012 8:50:00 PM

    congrats Carol on another amazing win for this sensitive Haiku luv.. for PD's contest..

  1. Date: 3/16/2012 8:47:00 PM

    congrats Carrie on another amazing win for a wonderfully writtern Haiku luv..

  1. Date: 3/16/2012 8:09:00 AM

    Congrats, Carol. Awesome. Enjoyed. Nice going, my friend. luv and hugs, Ralphie

  1. Date: 3/16/2012 7:04:00 AM

    I really like this haiku, great emotion.

  1. Date: 3/16/2012 4:59:00 AM

    Congrats on your placerment in the contest. I really like your haiku...................:) Liz

  1. Date: 3/16/2012 12:49:00 AM

    Lovely piece, dear Carol! Congratulations on your winning in PD's Contest! Ruben.

  1. Date: 3/15/2012 10:49:00 PM

    carol, ~.Congratulations in my haiku contest ;-) THANK YOU FOR SUPPORTING ;-) my contest... Enjoyed your entry,~ always*PD

  1. Date: 2/21/2012 11:02:00 PM

    What a wonderful piece. I aspire to that economy of words, so well chosen and expressive. - Chuck

  1. Date: 2/13/2012 10:22:00 PM

    Just stopping BY to give a big HI. Happy Valentine's Day, Carol.

  1. Date: 2/13/2012 1:35:00 PM

    Lovely uplifting haiku, my friend

  1. Date: 2/13/2012 6:56:00 AM

    Hi again. Thanks for your note of congrads on my poem "man naked" My muse is honored also. Jancarl

  1. Date: 2/13/2012 12:24:00 AM

    A beautiful Haiku poem. Few words that convey a sad as well as a lovely experience. I enjoyed reading this tonight Carol. Thank you for your inspiring thoughts about my poems. Love Dalila

  1. Date: 2/12/2012 5:43:00 PM

    Right on, when one closes another one... well. Love is eternal and infinite in its supply but it takes a lot of opening doors for some to find the right home. Here is to you being found blessed and loved always Mrs. Carol. Thanks for sharing!

  1. Date: 2/12/2012 2:38:00 AM


  1. Date: 2/11/2012 2:14:00 PM

    Carol-What a nice inspirational poem! Have a fantastic weekend :)

  1. Date: 2/11/2012 7:07:00 AM

    Hopeful haiku. One door closes another opens.

  1. Date: 2/11/2012 2:18:00 AM

    Thank you, Carol, for your constant encouragement. Loved your Haiku. Few words but they speak volumes. Love, Maureen

  1. Date: 2/10/2012 9:27:00 PM

    Hi carol! This is a great haiku and brought some memories. I am a premium member and when i went to see what your poem was about it would not let me in. any ideas? hate to bother you, but I can't seem to get any answers. Thanks and bless you, xoox Jancarl

  1. Date: 2/10/2012 5:04:00 PM

    Very nice,Carol, I love a great haiku. I used your name in a poem I just posted, named. "Posting Comments Acrostic". I hope you don't mind.

  1. Date: 2/10/2012 4:33:00 PM

    This is sad but lovely Carol , Hugs and best wishes ,Declan xxx

  1. Date: 2/10/2012 3:57:00 PM

    Thank you for your wonderful comments Carol! Thank you for the npspiration that you are to fellow soupers as well! Wishing you a very fantastic weekend! God bless!

  1. Date: 2/10/2012 3:08:00 PM

    Oh such a nice haiku ;} nice to see you on my page ,, hope you are well and happy,, ;}

  1. Date: 2/10/2012 1:32:00 PM

    I hope the other door leads to some happiness. Nicely expressed poem.Thanks for sharing it.God bless you. Hugs!Erich

  1. Date: 2/10/2012 12:02:00 PM

    for me those doors lead through hell. and through smoke and fire i tell my tales. looking for a better way. far and few are happy days. look for love to lead the way. so often have i been lead astray.

  1. Date: 2/10/2012 11:48:00 AM

    Nice thought truly and wonderfully penned with few words in haiku. Our lovely friend Sara said well and nice, loved always, bl

  1. Date: 2/10/2012 10:31:00 AM

    God never closes a door unless He is going to open a window and usually to something great worth waiting a little long to receive...Thanks for stopping by..Sara