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Moments in Time

There are these moments in time. When the world gets confusing... 
When I thought you and I were more. Slowly we faded and when nothing was left. 
You walked away... What happened?

Isn’t it supposed to be a fairy tale ending? Weren’t you going to be mine? 
“Until death do we part.”?
At least that’s what you said when I gave you my heart. 

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  1. Date: 3/2/2012 7:00:00 AM
    You always have to give all of your heart even if it hurts.

    moncada Avatar sarah moncada
    Date: 3/3/2012 12:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    that is true, nothing can be more joyous or more painful than giving your heart to someone :) thank you for reading my work
  1. Date: 2/10/2012 8:05:00 AM
    I truly enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today Sarah. I hope you have an amazing weekend. Love, Carol

    moncada Avatar sarah moncada
    Date: 2/10/2012 2:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you :) and I hope that you have an amazing weekend as well. -love sarah:)
  1. Date: 2/9/2012 12:08:00 PM
    Anquish is something I understand. And I've learned it's healing to get it out. A touching piece. Thank you for your share

    moncada Avatar sarah moncada
    Date: 2/9/2012 2:08:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I agree 100% and no thank you for taking the time to read it