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Time Intrepid

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Time Intrepid

The never ending journey
It can take you anywhere
Name it and your 're there 

As two hearts melt into one 
It's an explosion of passion
Seeping out to light the night
Lusting hearts coming together

Emotions held captive within 
Candles burning bright now 
Shades of midnight blue
Light up the purple skies 
Desperate hands touching

Tender is the night we touch
Lying within each other's arms
A thousand eyes watching us 

As shadows fly across the sky 
Some are past, some still survive 
Make my way down the chamber of love
I hear such sweet moaning from above 

Hands touching flesh to flesh as 
The scent of us mingle in the air 
Flashes of the cosmos floating thru
The infinite wisdom surrounding us
I like it this way as we touch ~ yes 
This is the way I'd like us to  stay 

You take me there where I want to be 
there is no time or space with us  as  
Love's passions receive their message  
And we drift away on clouds of lust 
   

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  1. Date: 3/10/2013 6:24:00 PM
    Wow, that was intense. Awesome! I loved it! Nice job!

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 3/12/2013 1:30:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Ashley.
  1. Date: 2/18/2013 10:04:00 PM
    oooh la la. a passionate one from you. SO NICE. This was a great one to discover!!

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 2/18/2013 11:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Andrea ;}
  1. Date: 2/18/2013 10:03:00 PM
    oh good, there are older poems of yours I have not seen, so let me check out this one!!

  1. Date: 2/11/2013 2:38:00 AM
    the heat of passion lasts awhile, enough until we get to smile, all entitled to our ration, for love comes into fashion, just maybe for the just ...

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 2/17/2013 6:43:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for reading Don ;}
  1. Date: 11/27/2012 7:30:00 AM
    Some times us guys are a bit dense, sorry things didn't work out. Fantastic poem though. You have skill relaying your passion with words. I liked your stars as eyes metaphor. Well done. One spelling error sent should be scent.

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 11/27/2012 6:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Richard,,,, together 17 years ,,, so I have a lot of writing material ;} thanks for reading,,, have a great day ;}
  1. Date: 11/6/2012 6:21:00 PM
    Wow! Very sexy! Sorry to read its about your ex. I have an ex I was with for 8 years and never felt this kind of passion so know it wasn't a waste of time. Now I'm struggling with the loss of a bf of only 18 months. With him, it was that kind of passion and I wonder if I'll ever feel that again. Beautifully written.

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 11/6/2012 6:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Lori,,,,, thank you for reading my words,,,,, we were together for 17 years,,,, he always said "forever" the last year it fell apart,,, 5yrs I've been single now. Even though he came back " 3" times,, said he'd always love me. I have a few others on here about him. KHAN ' Shattered Dreaming" Life After Love " ,,, thank you for liking my poems Lori ;}
  1. Date: 10/25/2012 6:14:00 PM
    Love sure is inspiring aye! Light & Love

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 10/25/2012 7:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    This was written about my X ,, we were together for 17 years ,,,, nothing stays the same. thank you for reading Debbie ;}
  1. Date: 10/23/2012 12:27:00 PM
    Love under a midnight sky! fav. line~a thousand eyes watching us. Enjoyed greatly. :) Tanya

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 10/23/2012 5:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Tanya,,,, I wrote this with my X in mind. We were together " 17 " years, he wrote for me as well. we parted on good terms.
  1. Date: 3/28/2012 8:03:00 PM
    coming together with the blest, where angels float, with sweet caress, when you are not being a pest, timeless love you know it...

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 3/28/2012 8:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    yup,,, timeless love ;} thank you for reading ;} I hope you are happy and smiling !
  1. Date: 2/10/2012 9:56:00 AM
    Wow this poem is so powerful. Brings out such amazing emotions. great job

  1. Date: 2/9/2012 2:55:00 PM
    Quick! Call my doctor! My pacemaker just exploded! I like this poem muchissimo! Love, daver

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 2/11/2012 9:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I hear the doc coming now ;} thank you !
  1. Date: 2/9/2012 2:18:00 AM
    Debbie you written good,sweet and soft poem I enjoy it. - oxox love Anne-Lise