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2-8-2012 Prompt: hat -Written for NaHaiWriMo

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2-8-2012 Prompt: hat -Written for NaHaiWriMo

exotic plumage
adorning expensive hats—
chicks

© February 8, 2011
Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

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  1. Date: 2/8/2012 9:08:00 PM
    hi dane, soup MAIL, please!!..important

    Smith-Johnsen Avatar Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
    Date: 2/8/2012 10:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for supporting my footle contest...it is still open as of today.
  1. Date: 2/8/2012 3:46:00 PM
    I say have the chicks wear hats, I do. I didn't really get what you here trying to express, not in haiku form, was unexpected. I kinds like it though....?

    Smith-Johnsen Avatar Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
    Date: 2/8/2012 10:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Learn about non 5-7-5 haiku https://www.facebook.com/pages/NaHaiWriMo/108107262587697
    Smith-Johnsen Avatar Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
    Date: 2/8/2012 10:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    NaHaiWriMo ia group that writes non 5-7-5 haiku in order to honor the Japanese, who started the form. NOTE: chicks in the hat poem is juxtaposition! because it takes us away form the hats....to the mama-bird's chicks that died when their moms were killed. It also takes us to girls that wear those hats. I left it like that intentionally. Thanks for commenting I hope this has helped you understand it a little better. Smiles
    Smith-Johnsen Avatar Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
    Date: 2/8/2012 10:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    https://www.facebook.com/pages/NaHaiWriMo/108107262587697 a group that writes non 5-7-5 haiku in order to honor the Japanese, who started the form. NOTE: chicks in the hat poem is juxtaposition! because it takes us away form the hats....to the mama-bird's chicks that died when their moms were killed. It also takes us to girls that wear those hats. I left it like that intentionally. Thanks for commenting I hope this has helped you understand it a little better. Smiles