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If And When

If you can't stand the words I write,don't read them If you can't stand the sight of me,don't look at me If you can't stand the sound of my voice,don't listen to me If you can't stand to be around me,then leave BUT When you wish you would have read what I wrote,it won't be there When you wish someone would notice you,I won't be there When you wish someone would listen to you,I won't be there When you wish you had someone to talk to,I won't be there *Choose your actions wisely*
Dan Kearley:2-6-12

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  1. Date: 9/28/2012 1:28:00 AM

    ah,,,nothing to say except directly answer YES YES YES..wiseman will choose the wisely action ..hahah <3<3<3 SK

  1. Date: 5/27/2012 1:21:00 AM

    Oh too right Dan........ Love it.

  1. Date: 3/8/2012 6:15:00 AM

    Heaven forbid that you shouldn't be there. How could I stand it? Ddon't you dare leave me or I'll put a hex on ya! Think I'll fave this if that's ok with you. :)

  1. Date: 2/24/2012 3:58:00 AM

    I'm listening,hearing,watching and reading this clever post -Charma :)

  1. Date: 2/23/2012 6:22:00 PM

    Seriously epic written words here Dan. Astounding.

  1. Date: 2/16/2012 8:23:00 AM

    Yeah. Poem with attitude. Loved this!!!

  1. Date: 2/9/2012 5:36:00 PM

    Dan you are one of a kind, but that is what I like about you, when I read your words they are real, always love to see your face and your words and your comments, love and light, vie

  1. Date: 2/8/2012 4:27:00 PM

    O my gosh Dan, where has everybody been rushing off to get Midol at? cause I missed it, none on the shelf for ME. btw, love your writing style always topnotch, with love and blessings, Cindy

  1. Date: 2/7/2012 5:06:00 PM

    Oh Dan this sounds so sad, so much truth but also so much frustration and despair and a reaching out silently within the words! yes we all need to choose our actions wisely especially in matters of the heart!

  1. Date: 2/7/2012 3:37:00 PM

    Very insightful Dan...great write! Hugs

    Kearley Avatar Dan Kearley Date: 2/9/2012 9:46:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks :o) Nice to see you again also.
  1. Date: 2/7/2012 1:22:00 PM

    Well Danny boy, I'm here and enjoy the read, I look and enjoy the face, can't hear you except through your words and they are speial like always. Since you're not here I'll just enjoy the thought. No regrets for me, how about you? Hugs, Lizzie

    Kearley Avatar Dan Kearley Date: 2/7/2012 2:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Nope,none for me either..Nice to see you again! I missed you! :o)
  1. Date: 2/7/2012 10:29:00 AM

    very perceptive and profound! i like this very much!

    Kearley Avatar Dan Kearley Date: 2/7/2012 10:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you very much Ilene.Thank you for stopping bye. :o)
  1. Date: 2/7/2012 7:37:00 AM

    I love to read what you wrote Dan, and it is GOOD my: F.E.F. - oxox love Anne-Lise

    Kearley Avatar Dan Kearley Date: 2/7/2012 10:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Anne Lise,I like yours also.my:F.E.F :o)
  1. Date: 2/7/2012 3:56:00 AM

    thats good advice Danny,I wish you were omnipresent!but i like reading your po!

    Kearley Avatar Dan Kearley Date: 2/7/2012 10:14:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Yasmin,sometimes I wish I was too.I also enjoy reading your poetry :o)