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We Break

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Below is the poem entitled We Break which was written by poet Juli- Michelle. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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We Break

breathing 
i say i'm breathing, i appear to be, 
but they do not see, they cannot ever

aching
i am not aching, i say that i'm not, 
and they do not see that i really am

everyone
feels the way i do. we hide everything, 
inside our heads and our hearts

buliding
it all just builds up until that crucial moment, 
when it snaps, and we break

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  1. Date: 8/2/2012 8:31:00 PM
    Wonderful poem read today. Really we break, i agree.Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 2/12/2012 2:54:00 AM
    JULI,, stopping by to wish you a SWEET VALENTINE.. AND A WONDERFUL , congratulations... ON your wonderful win In this awesome contest. Enjoyed ;-) . have yourself a wonderful valentines. @lways & @lways *xox~PD

  1. Date: 2/7/2012 10:07:00 PM
    Very prophetic write Juli-Michelle. Nicely done

  1. Date: 2/7/2012 5:12:00 PM
    Congratulations on a great write and a terrific win. Jon

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    Date: 2/8/2012 8:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks