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Dangling on a thread

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Below is the poem entitled Dangling on a thread which was written by poet Murray Mahauariki. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Dangling on a thread

I sit here thinking, no future can I truly see, always you keep me at bay, so insecure and stubborn your ways, my heart waits in dread, while you leave it dangling on a thread. M.Mahauariki © 2012

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  1. Date: 2/5/2012 8:53:00 PM
    Another awesome poem! Keep up the oustanding work! Always, Laura