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  1. Date: 2/7/2012 7:55:00 PM
    Congrats on your win with this great haiku, David! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 2/7/2012 11:40:00 AM
    Congratulations to you on your placement in P.D's "Any Poem You Posted This Week" contest David. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/6/2012 9:22:00 PM
    David, congrats... on your wonderful win.. thank you for your support ;-)' always PD

  1. Date: 2/6/2012 8:04:00 PM
    Congrats. David on your special win, love,vie

  1. Date: 2/6/2012 5:50:00 PM
    bravo on these lines David and congrats on a marvelous win luv.. u stated it all perfectly luv..

  1. Date: 2/6/2012 4:46:00 PM
    Fine job again David

  1. Date: 2/6/2012 3:38:00 PM
    all true mate matter who's army of course...flows it mate....

  1. Date: 2/6/2012 1:51:00 PM
    Interesting winning Haiku..Congrats on your win..Sara

  1. Date: 2/6/2012 10:44:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win David, love Elizabeth

  1. Date: 2/6/2012 9:14:00 AM
    Congratulations! Indeed, we should listen our masters, in every aspect. :)

  1. Date: 2/6/2012 8:49:00 AM
    In Ancient Japan is was honorable for a samurai to obey his shogun. Even to kill themselves. We can even say that the believer in the Lord is a warrior fighting the good fight of faith against the enemy, and loves to hear the Master's voice.

    Bunton Avatar Christopher Bunton
    Date: 2/6/2012 8:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    "It was"---corrected.
  1. Date: 2/6/2012 8:45:00 AM

  1. Date: 2/6/2012 8:36:00 AM
    sounds more like a slave's life to me. I guess I'm not getting it. sorry! congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 2/6/2012 7:59:00 AM
    Well said David. Congratulations

  1. Date: 2/6/2012 4:48:00 AM
    Congratulations David x

  1. Date: 2/5/2012 10:20:00 PM
    Excellent Haiku! Loved it Always, Laura

  1. Date: 2/5/2012 3:57:00 AM
    we are all under orders, unless one is number one, interesting Haiku, David, or should i say intriguing. anyway i like this alot. harry

  1. Date: 2/4/2012 3:22:00 PM
    I sure don't think this is about a dog,is it? (from a comment below) I almost see it as a haiku about God and his children who fight for the right.

  1. Date: 2/4/2012 1:33:00 PM
    I agree with what Vie has stated below. Are you describing a dog here?

  1. Date: 2/4/2012 7:10:00 AM
    Ditto David, nice write, love,vie