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Worth waiting for

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Worth waiting for

Quiet ripples move to shore
It’s still and calm, I’m waiting for more

A water lily rose, a splash and tremor
Anticipation sitting on a dock I adore

The lake glistens, subtlety cattails rustled
Rising mist in the morning light, awakened

Down you stroll like fog out of the sea
Rolling in the dawn air you encircle me

We mingle with the grass and dew
A picture I like of me and you

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  1. Date: 11/4/2012 1:00:00 PM
    Pleasantly sensuous and well constructed. I will be reading more.... Jake

  1. Date: 2/11/2012 10:32:00 PM
    You Paint pictures within words, Raskin,Thank you for sharing, Wordancer

  1. Date: 2/11/2012 12:26:00 PM
    Nice descriptive set of rhyming couplets.

  1. Date: 2/11/2012 10:26:00 AM
    Great picture, Raskin. I'll add some gulls - my favorite bird - just for the noise. Come to think of it, this piece is so wonderfully quiet, let's leave the gulls out. Enjoyed mucho. daver

  1. Date: 2/4/2012 7:13:00 AM
    This is the harmony of poetry, enjoyed. luv,vie

  1. Date: 2/4/2012 7:10:00 AM
    Quite romantic. nice one x

  1. Date: 2/4/2012 6:36:00 AM
    Very expressive and creative work..Like the metaphoric language used to express physical affection of a couple..Sara

  1. Date: 2/4/2012 5:58:00 AM
    Romantick love poem ---- well done! - oxox hugs Anne-Lise

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    Date: 2/4/2012 6:03:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Anne-Lise!