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John John

Don’t let guilt be the drive that takes you away 
from sanity! 
Eventually everything you feel emotionally will be 
set free.
Honestly I never thought I’d care so much that 
you’re gone 
But, I miss you and I know now that I’m wrong…

Why did god have to take you away? 
Couldn’t he see you’re still needed here? 
Mom needs you and so do your kids. 
Dad pretends not to care but inside the feelings 
exist. 

Why did you leave, you should’ve fought harder to 
stay alive.
We miss you as the days go by.
I see your face every time I close my eyes. 
But it’s not the same without you here today. 
With you gone the days just fade away..

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  1. Date: 3/2/2012 7:04:00 AM

    Imsorry for your loss. Very nice dedication.Ioften write about love and loss. Its hard to write about death and loss so I appreciate the creativity that comes from that sorrow and pain. Nice job

    moncada Avatar sarah moncada Date: 3/3/2012 12:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I also write about love and loss but since my brothers death and my cousins as well, death and loss have been my inpiration. Thank you
  1. Date: 2/3/2012 10:42:00 AM

    Sad and lovely poem Saah. - oxox love Anne-Lise

    moncada Avatar sarah moncada Date: 2/3/2012 10:43:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you.