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ANGELS

I belived angels only exists in heaven,
but that is not true, just look around you.
They are everywhere....
 
Big and small, high and low, young and old, light and dark, all of them with their different form. 

Light wings, dark wings, worn wings, broken wings,
shaggy wings, colourful wings, trembling wings, bright wings,
mat wings, playful wings, busy wings, self-absorbed wings.

Happy eyes, kind eyes, evil eyes, tired eyes, sore eyes, eyes that have experienced a lot,
colourful eyes, frighten eyes, bright eyes, old eyes, busy eyes and greedy eyes....

There is an angel in us all, we just have different baggage with us....




Entered Gail Doyle's contest Touched by an angel 03/26/2012

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  1. Date: 8/30/2012 2:47:00 AM

    nice one Laila, xoxoxoxox

  1. Date: 4/27/2012 2:57:00 PM

    So So true, Love your poem!!!

    Mjelde Avatar Laila Andresen Mjelde Date: 4/28/2012 8:26:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Glad you liked it, thank your visiting my poem! oxoxo Laila
  1. Date: 2/14/2012 12:54:00 PM

    Laila I think this poem is so peacful to read. Is beautifully written.

    Mjelde Avatar Laila Andresen Mjelde Date: 2/14/2012 2:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so much Yasmin, glad you red it! Keep up your good work, visit you again soon! oxoxo love Laila
  1. Date: 2/7/2012 2:42:00 PM

    Wonderful words Laila, I never thought of myself as an angel but wouldn't mind trying it on for size. I see you are new, I know you'll enjoy your time with us here on Soup. Great group of people. Thanks for your sweet visit. Elizabeth

    Mjelde Avatar Laila Andresen Mjelde Date: 2/7/2012 3:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank for your warm welcome and great feedback, its hard to an angel! xoxo hugs Laila
  1. Date: 2/7/2012 1:27:00 AM

    Very nice,, I believe in angels ;}

    Mjelde Avatar Laila Andresen Mjelde Date: 2/7/2012 11:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Mjelde Avatar Laila Andresen Mjelde Date: 2/7/2012 4:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for reading my poem Debbie. -oxox love Laila
  1. Date: 2/6/2012 3:56:00 PM

    Love this and thank you for commenting on my poem Hurt. It meant a lot to me thank you. I love this poem and it is so true good job :)

    Mjelde Avatar Laila Andresen Mjelde Date: 2/6/2012 11:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for reading my poem, and I ment every word in my comment on your poem! Take care! xoxo hugs Laila
  1. Date: 2/6/2012 7:07:00 AM

    You really are fantastic.

    Mjelde Avatar Laila Andresen Mjelde Date: 2/6/2012 7:45:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you very much!!!And for reading my poem - oxox love Laila
  1. Date: 2/5/2012 7:30:00 PM

    Enjoyed your poetry today laila. Thank you for sharing it. I also believe they are around us in different forms. Thank you for your kind words. Much love and light

    Mjelde Avatar Laila Andresen Mjelde Date: 2/6/2012 4:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for reading my poem and for your kind words ;0) -oxox love Laila
  1. Date: 2/5/2012 3:40:00 PM

    I believe in Angels too. This is a good poem. I had a saying that I used to put in all my poems before. ( Friends are Angels that help you fly, when your wings want to fold. ) Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

    Mjelde Avatar Laila Andresen Mjelde Date: 2/5/2012 5:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for comment and read my poem! oxox love Laila
  1. Date: 2/5/2012 1:45:00 PM

    Thank you for bringing the Gospel. I certainly agree with you. I have been helped by so many people in my life who just appeared seemingly out of nowhere. You have written a poem that is beautifully written and makes sense. I wish you mountains of success in your poetry career.

    Mjelde Avatar Laila Andresen Mjelde Date: 2/5/2012 3:08:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank for nice words and for reading my poem. I appreciate that my poems makes sence for my readers! oxox love Laila
  1. Date: 2/5/2012 12:15:00 PM

    so true.thank you for your comments.noone knows how serious I am.

    Mjelde Avatar Laila Andresen Mjelde Date: 2/5/2012 3:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for your feedback, and for reading my poems aswell! oxox love Laila
  1. Date: 2/5/2012 11:28:00 AM

    A most lovely inspiring read and yes I totally agree with you. There is an angel in us all...very moving and captivationg read. Million thx for sharing!

    Mjelde Avatar Laila Andresen Mjelde Date: 2/5/2012 11:37:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for reading my poem and good feedback with kind words! oxox love Laila
  1. Date: 2/5/2012 3:12:00 AM

    HI again Laila-- this sure made me smile, it's so true, that angels are all around us-- and they come in different forms :) I also like what you say here, how there's an angel in all of us, so true :D!

     Avatar Date: 2/5/2012 5:03:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi back at you! Thank you for still reading me, appreciate that you do! I think that all people can compare themselves with some of my pointers! Take care my friend! oxoxo love Laila
  1. Date: 2/4/2012 12:50:00 PM

    That is a beautiful written poem Laila! Liked it lots,my angel:)

    Mjelde Avatar Laila Andresen Mjelde Date: 2/4/2012 5:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Arild, I really appreciate your opinion! xoxo Laila
  1. Date: 2/4/2012 8:39:00 AM

    A very enjoyable read... Great poem... I like your theme... Cool

    Mjelde Avatar Laila Andresen Mjelde Date: 2/4/2012 12:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for reading my poem! xoxoxo Laila
  1. Date: 2/4/2012 2:22:00 AM

    Thanks, Laila, glad you enjoyed my poem. God bless, Maureen

    Mjelde Avatar Laila Andresen Mjelde Date: 2/4/2012 3:00:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for reading my poem Maureen. oxox love Laila
  1. Date: 2/3/2012 6:28:00 PM

    Laila it is a beautiful poem! You are mine angel!!- oxox love mum

    Mjelde Avatar Laila Andresen Mjelde Date: 2/4/2012 4:02:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for reading my poem mom, you are also my angel!! ;o) -oxox love Laila
  1. Date: 2/3/2012 5:13:00 PM

    Indeed, I agree with you there is an angel in all of us, but I believe in my guardinan angel.Lovely poem I enjoyed reading it.God bless you. Hugs!Erich

    Mjelde Avatar Laila Andresen Mjelde Date: 2/3/2012 5:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for reading my poem! we all have a guardian angel aswell! xoxoxo Laila
  1. Date: 2/3/2012 4:18:00 PM

    lovely I believe in angels. thank you for sharing.

    Mjelde Avatar Laila Andresen Mjelde Date: 2/3/2012 4:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for reading my poem! ps: I belive also! xoxoxo Laila
  1. Date: 2/3/2012 3:19:00 PM

    I must say that I have a spiritual connection to your writes. Both cover my moments of loss. The rock as it was immediately after my pain filled loss and these words describe the moments after... Where I felt my paganistic roots flourish and I accepted that reality is more comforting than hope..great write.. Karen

    Mjelde Avatar Laila Andresen Mjelde Date: 2/3/2012 3:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for reading my poems and thank you for lovely feedback! xoxoxo Laila
  1. Date: 2/3/2012 3:00:00 PM

    This is so cute Laila, I believe your one of them, with a pair of wings just for you, Love being sent your way dear woman, vie

    Mjelde Avatar Laila Andresen Mjelde Date: 2/3/2012 3:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for reading my poem and thank you vrey much for nice word! xoxoxo Laila
  1. Date: 2/3/2012 1:22:00 PM

    Yes they are. Is anna liese your sister?

    Mjelde Avatar Laila Andresen Mjelde Date: 2/3/2012 2:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for reading my poem!!Anne-Lise are my mom ;o) oxox love Laila