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Failure

Feels like the world and destiny is testing you,
Assuming you can simply overlook things,
Irrespective of always being genuine ,and never giving up
Like all great moments are dim, ignored, and forgotten;
Unless the world and destiny simply has the pleasure of testing your patience,
Repeatingly, that now you have to make a decision and recognize it is a phase,
Empowering those positive thoughts to erupt to sustain a noble empire of compassion.

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  1. Date: 8/3/2012 2:54:00 AM

    nice poem...congrats **Mary**

  1. Date: 6/12/2012 1:28:00 AM

    beautiful ,nice poetic interpretation .thank you for sharing .jk

  1. Date: 6/9/2012 11:41:00 PM

    hi!! bhavna great thoughts about failure..inspirational... good work..

  1. Date: 5/10/2012 9:47:00 AM

    Love this piece as well Bhavna!! Its a part of Life.

  1. Date: 3/6/2012 8:25:00 PM

    Hi Bhavna, Thanks for your kind comment re my poem. Enjoyed your poem - failure is just a lesson in life. We all fail and that's how we learn to get things right [hopefully]. Love, Maureen

  1. Date: 2/11/2012 12:13:00 AM

    To sustain the noble empire of compassion...beautiful..reason for endurance midst the brokenness..the only thing we take with us to what is next is the heart within us that has been nurtured by empathy and grace....thank you.. Lawrence

  1. Date: 2/10/2012 9:33:00 AM

    Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight.. ontinue to share words with luv and thankxxx for your sweet comment on my poetry luv..

  1. Date: 2/10/2012 7:26:00 AM

    Wery good poem Bhavana, life goes on - good day and bad day my friend.Have a good one to day! - oxox love Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 2/7/2012 9:25:00 PM

    Found your page Bhavna And found an acrostic verse I did not relate the term to poetry Learning can came from Unlikely sources when one turns pages Right and left, the Poetry Soup pages Enfolding the knowledge I seek I never fail because I will always try again and succeed in the trying! wordancer

  1. Date: 2/5/2012 9:37:00 AM

    Hello, this write is the type that the more I read the more I see. This starts of to me in a tone of things being not perfect but builds up to a if you take a positive attitude, things may be easier or improved. You have one of my favourite words here (says so much to me) nobel. A lovely write to encourage positivity... Karen

  1. Date: 2/2/2012 12:09:00 PM

    Enjoyed reading your very expressive work this afternoon...I am glad that I chose this one as one that I could read today..Those positive thoughts make the difference between a good day and a bad...Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara