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Fluff

Maybe you were foaming at the mouth
Brain dead from reading so many poems now
That one more poem, my poem, was just too much
For you, depleted of original thought, to touch
And so you succumbed to the Horror I see
The “Great Work!” comment you left for me 

I can only hope that in your stupor
You didn’t realize your false sounding blooper
Because I would hate to think that your message was Fluff
To stroke my ego, or because you couldn’t scrounge up
Even one nice thing to say 
About my writing today 

The question remains, haunting my brain:
Did you honestly like it and just take the short cut,
Or did you pump me up with a load of fluff?


1/31/12
Received 1st place in Carol's "Fluff" contest

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  1. Date: 7/12/2012 9:42:00 AM

    You are truly gifted...I sense pain in your life and I hope it's not so.... "Love"

  1. Date: 5/3/2012 12:33:00 PM

    Congrats on the win, liked the sentiment and the rhyming, and to be fair the comments are quire funny too! Thanks for you comments, you have some interting titles which I'll be back to read later

  1. Date: 5/2/2012 7:37:00 PM

    Hello, Susan;-) I see you won first place in my contest with your fluff poem. I remember why! I super enjoyed this poem. Your bottom question was amazing. Can you imagine being pumped with a load of fluff by everyone! As if it exist, that is the beauty of fluff it can be anything and come from anyone. I'm enjoyed my interpretation on your win. Nathan, is always telling me how good my work is. lots of BS~ coming from him. I liked the first second third and forth time i read this poem. xox~PD

  1. Date: 3/7/2012 9:15:00 PM

    This question has crossed my mind a time or two. Congrats on your win in PD's contest, Susan! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 3/7/2012 6:24:00 AM

    A belated congratulations on your win in P.D.'s contest Susan. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 3/6/2012 8:36:00 AM

    I think you have put in words what many of us question silently and to which at some time or another we can all plead guilty. This is a "Great Work". Really!!

  1. Date: 3/5/2012 8:20:00 PM

    Congrats on your win, Susan. I really like it...not pumping you up with fluff! LOL, Blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 3/5/2012 8:12:00 PM

    congrats Susan on an eloquent write and win luv.. top notch poetry .. cool piece..

  1. Date: 3/5/2012 9:36:00 AM

    Congrats, Sue. Excellent write. Nice going. hugs, Ralph

  1. Date: 3/4/2012 8:22:00 PM

    Great work! : )

    O. Avatar Ruben O. Date: 3/4/2012 8:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Congratulations on your success in PD's Contest, Susan! Ruben.
  1. Date: 3/4/2012 6:57:00 PM

    Susan,, .congratulations! in my contest...muched enjoyed your entry,;-) always*PD

  1. Date: 2/12/2012 2:25:00 AM

    SUSAN,, stopping by to wish you a SWEET VALENTINE.. AND A WONDERFUL , congratulations... ON your wonderful win In this awesome contest. Enjoyed ;-) . have yourself a wonderful valentines. @lways & @lways *xox~PD

  1. Date: 2/10/2012 12:41:00 PM

    You woke us up....Or did you just catch us off guard? Either event, well done.....Congratulations ( <---- see, no 'congrats') on a very clever write and well deserved win. ..........How's that for fluff?

  1. Date: 2/10/2012 11:59:00 AM

    Congratulations on your placement in my "FLUFF" contest Susan. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/10/2012 8:35:00 AM

    This is excellence. Susan congrats on your today in Carol's contest. Hugs, Gail

  1. Date: 2/10/2012 1:29:00 AM

    Brilliant love it no cut and paste comments here for you congratulations xx

  1. Date: 2/9/2012 8:06:00 PM

    I love the message in this outstanding piece! I too, tire of just a bit of fluff, sort of seems like a piece wasn't read at all. Well said, Susan!

  1. Date: 2/9/2012 5:35:00 PM

    Congrats, Sue. Great piece. Enjoyed. Nice going. luv Ralph

  1. Date: 2/9/2012 5:28:00 PM

    Congrats. Susan on your special winning poetry, love,vie

  1. Date: 2/9/2012 4:56:00 PM

    congrats Susan on a magnificent first place win for this awesome write on Fluff.. super one..luv.. thankxx for enjoying my Metamorphosis ... it was written for someone very special who was taken from my life a while ago..luv..

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