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Kissinglingua

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Kissinglingua

We're light-kissed tonight, touching tingling heights of crushed glitter stars; your tongue explores contours, a topography of hidden hollows, as the star-sharded sky kisses the dew-wet valley below.

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  1. Date: 12/24/2013 2:39:00 PM
    Charlotte....dang! lol This was beautifully enchanting :)

  1. Date: 3/18/2013 10:05:00 AM
    Glad i saw this today..reading it was itself a tingling experience..soupmail ;) Jag

  1. Date: 7/9/2012 6:01:00 PM
    That wet valley below intrigues, Is there also a counterpart with the exploring tongue? One is tempted to conclude that the valley can be metaphor for an even deeper probe...n'est ce pas? Such kisses encourage that! :-)

  1. Date: 2/7/2012 7:55:00 AM
    Congratulations to you on your win in Tracie 's "Sijo Kisses" contest Charlotte. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/6/2012 9:03:00 PM
    Congrats here too!! So glad you liked my rhyming haiku. It had been originally meant for a contest in which the judge specifically asked us to rhyme our haiku!!

  1. Date: 2/5/2012 9:36:00 PM
    Congrats on your win! Blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 2/5/2012 9:31:00 AM
    Congrulations Charlotte x

  1. Date: 2/5/2012 9:00:00 AM
    Charlotte congrats on your win..David

  1. Date: 2/5/2012 8:19:00 AM
    congrats Charlotte on a superb second place win for this treasured entry of sijo kissing.. wow.. a brilliant one..luv..

  1. Date: 2/3/2012 10:25:00 AM
    Wonderful sentiment here, one gets to feel every word, beautiful poem. harry

  1. Date: 2/2/2012 11:28:00 PM
    Wowsers-- this is such an awesome way to write about a kiss! Amazing how you put in such cool imagery in just three lines, Charlotte! I won't be surprised to see this place high! and thanks so much for your heartwarming comments in mine :D

  1. Date: 2/2/2012 7:31:00 PM
    Hallmark will hit the bestseller's list if they put this on their card! Thanks for your kind comment and sweet message of congratulations to my winning Sijo! More power, Charlotte! =)

  1. Date: 2/1/2012 9:35:00 AM
    Smile ˜ Yessss, some things just seem much more beautiful when coming from certain vantage points * My dear sweeet beautiful Charlotte ˜ Definitely, this would be one of those wonderfully beautiful views ˜ My love, Always, John!:) *

  1. Date: 2/1/2012 8:44:00 AM
    with a hardened resolve i declair thisa tempting piece.

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  1. Date: 2/1/2012 7:22:00 AM
    Unique and beautiful with a hint of erotic. Enjoyed your poem Charlotte, love, vie Please read my poem entitled Moon Night Flowers, since you inspired it.

  1. Date: 1/31/2012 11:28:00 PM
    hhmmmm, GREAT symbolism there, Charlotte. WOW!

  1. Date: 1/31/2012 9:38:00 PM
    Wowie! This is very descriptive writing!

  1. Date: 1/31/2012 9:32:00 PM
    nice poem. I enjoyed reading it.

  1. Date: 1/31/2012 6:11:00 PM
    Char, This is one steamy kiss...I can't write stuff like this...gets me all blushing!! The title is an anatomical one...cool! Gwendolen