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My PoetrySoup

M y eyes see what your heart is feeling
Y our feelings you write out as poetry

P ain, love, joy, wonder, inspiration
O nly you can help me see, hear,and feel you
E ven though only words you have written they
T ouch my heart and mind deeply from within
R equiring me to write a poem so full of feeling as
Y ou become my poetry I write from my heart
S mile, laugh, cry, whisper, or shout
O pen your heart, mind, and soul
U tter your words on paper or screen
P oetry is where I see and feel your soul

Tons of comma fun!
contest of Russell Sivey

Written by: Carol Brown
3rd Place Winner

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  1. Date: 5/8/2012 7:43:00 AM

    you are just too good !!

  1. Date: 4/10/2012 7:12:00 AM

    True to form and tells us what your concept of poetic life is. Thank you so much for your kind welcome and for reviewing my poem Awe Shucks.

  1. Date: 2/21/2012 11:56:00 AM


  1. Date: 2/17/2012 10:11:00 AM

    That was awesome on so many different levels!

  1. Date: 2/14/2012 7:40:00 PM

    Wonderful poem, I enjoyed reading it. And I am enjoying reading all the rest of your poems also.

  1. Date: 2/14/2012 5:35:00 AM

    Thank you

  1. Date: 2/13/2012 8:18:00 AM

    Awesome acrostic, Carol. Congratulations on your 3rd place win in Russell's contest...................S.Ronthorpe

  1. Date: 2/12/2012 9:20:00 PM

    I particularly enjoyed line "E" and how you ended it by using "THEY" to continue on into line "T". With me, it is the little things that make poetry enjoyable.

  1. Date: 2/12/2012 7:30:00 PM

    Very well written, Carol. God Bless and thanks for your kind words on my poem "Peace." Happy Valentine's Day, Cile

  1. Date: 2/12/2012 2:14:00 AM

    CAROL,, stopping by to wish you a SWEET VALENTINE.. AND A WONDERFUL , congratulations... ON your wonderful win In this awesome contest. Enjoyed ;-) . have yourself a wonderful valentines. @lways & @lways *xox~PD

  1. Date: 2/11/2012 11:50:00 AM

    Great poem and win Carol. Congratulations. Thank you for your many comments. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 2/11/2012 8:13:00 AM

    Congrats, Carol. Outstanding acrostic. Really enjoyed. Great job. Have a great weekend. luv Ralph

  1. Date: 2/10/2012 5:22:00 PM

    I know that I have read this one before but my comment is not here..Congrats on your winning work..Enjoyed reading again this eve..Sara

  1. Date: 2/8/2012 5:49:00 PM

    Very good writing, thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest

  1. Date: 2/5/2012 3:53:00 AM

    beautiful Carol, a joy to read. good luck in contest. harry

  1. Date: 2/4/2012 7:52:00 AM

    Carol, thanks for the lovely words you said in the context of my "Tunnel of Trees" poem. The wonders of life, many of which we enjoy here in Michigan, inspire many a poet, myself included. I really like your acrostic (above). You're a huge asset to the Soup community, ~Jim MeanderthalMan

  1. Date: 2/4/2012 4:36:00 AM

    My first poem that I've read on my return thank you for that one, love the way you pennned it, God bless you in your writtings always, tremendous gift that the Lord has bestowed on your life, God bless Robert

  1. Date: 2/2/2012 7:29:00 PM

    I think this should place high, Carol. Love how you made this an acrostic. Cyndi

  1. Date: 2/2/2012 3:13:00 PM

    IS your AVATAR a pic a hydrangeas??..I love those flowers!! You tackled this contest with finesse dear Carol.. Most unique entry ever!! Russell will enjoy how you poured out your poetry heart! ps..Throw in an extra line after the Y in P O E T R will have a better effect. Love ya and hope u are feeling better each day..Gwendolen

  1. Date: 2/1/2012 9:47:00 PM

    love it carol... thanks for always stopping in to see me... I love Poetry Soup... so glad I listened and became premium member.. xoxo Patrick

  1. Date: 2/1/2012 8:35:00 PM

    This Poem is a true reflection of Poet's mind and heart, which form shapes and figures with the thrill of joy and grief, sorrow and pain dipped with the melody of love and sometimes hatred. But those, who write to inspire others like you really deserves our love beyond words. Great write from your seasoned and wonderful pen and thank you for your kind and precious comments on Pearl like Tears. Love and best wishes always....Ravindra……Carol Brown

  1. Date: 2/1/2012 8:21:00 PM

    Carol... nice..nice.. but, my soul is empty... and right now.. i'm in wonder... but, smiling at the wonderful job you did..,,enjoyed stopping by tonight~ ;-) always,..pd.

  1. Date: 2/1/2012 6:14:00 PM

    Just great Carol, all ther best in the contest.

  1. Date: 2/1/2012 5:41:00 PM

    Nice work Carol, hope you are doing well. The best to you in your endeavors. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 2/1/2012 2:33:00 PM

    Good for you, Carol. I too love poetry soup, Love, daver

  1. Date: 2/1/2012 2:20:00 PM

    Nice poem Carol

  1. Date: 2/1/2012 11:32:00 AM

    you grace this page with much warmth, dear carol... splendid write worthy of a win!..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 2/1/2012 9:45:00 AM

    Wow! so nice all the ways, Best wishes for the contest, loved, bl

  1. Date: 2/1/2012 8:57:00 AM

    i can see this in the winners circle. yes it is filled with comas but the content is what made me see it with such high regard. i liked it very much. and i DO comment evey once in a while. daily now that my work has lightened up. john

  1. Date: 2/1/2012 6:55:00 AM

    Good luck in the comp carol. nice one x