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First Kiss

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First Kiss

His boyish charm; his arm around my shoulder; my fluttering heart. His lips softly met mine, and in that long, smooth hot summer night’s kiss, all that I’d longed for in my fourteen years suddenly blossomed. For the First Kiss Contest of Craig Cornish

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  1. Date: 7/21/2013 12:17:00 PM
    Hmmm...by the way where is GLEN some people below mentioned in their comments.Not found now in the poem.

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    Date: 7/22/2013 11:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    hmm, I wonder why I removed my tribute to Glen on this poem. Yes, he was the inspiration: a good old southern boy and son of a preacher man!
  1. Date: 8/23/2012 6:20:00 PM
    Lucky you to have a GREAt first kiss! Congrad's on your win! Light & Love

  1. Date: 8/23/2012 5:05:00 AM
    Congrats Andrea on a great win!!

  1. Date: 8/23/2012 1:04:00 AM
    Growing up, we carry an expectation with us and I'm happy to read that yours were met. Congratulations on your win, Andrea . Suzette

  1. Date: 8/22/2012 1:04:00 PM
    A lovely sijo. So much can be said in 3 short lines. Congratulations ona terrific kiss.

  1. Date: 8/22/2012 10:42:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Craig's "First Kiss" contest Andrea. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/22/2012 9:35:00 AM
    my warm and heartfelt CONGRATULATIONS on your win my dear friend, Andrea!!

  1. Date: 8/22/2012 3:59:00 AM
    Congratulations my friend!...I gotta' look up this poetry form...looks like it's 3 lines, 8 meter verse?...Anyway, I like it! - Tim

  1. Date: 8/22/2012 3:05:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win Andy you smoothy xx

  1. Date: 8/21/2012 8:56:00 PM
    very romantic ....congrats on your win Andrea

  1. Date: 2/6/2012 12:26:00 AM
    This is so sweet! I absolutely love this poem :)

  1. Date: 2/2/2012 10:33:00 PM
    How charming and romantic! Loved it. Best of luck in the contest.

  1. Date: 2/2/2012 1:28:00 PM
    Lovely tribute to Glen - wouldn't it be funny if he's a Soup member and read this!

  1. Date: 2/1/2012 9:35:00 PM
    sweet....yup... good luck...pd

  1. Date: 2/1/2012 5:20:00 PM
    Nice write about a puppy love from the past. Good write Andrea. I've also sent you soup mail.

  1. Date: 2/1/2012 8:11:00 AM
    Wow! This has a great flow to it (so I must be doing something wrong) I love blossom at the end :)

  1. Date: 1/31/2012 9:36:00 PM
    You pictured the first kiss so well Andrea! How can one forget the "fluttering heart" the luv dav, luv dav, luv duv... I love this piece, you portrayed it so well! Your suggestions are well appreciated. Thanks for following my work. Love Dalila

  1. Date: 1/31/2012 8:28:00 PM
    wow Andrea..we both began our kissing careers at a young age.. oh so fun to experience that first blush of luv captured in your lines my friend.. hope Glenn knows what he missed.. I know my ex sure does.. haha.. good luck luv..

  1. Date: 1/31/2012 7:23:00 PM
    Wow what a lovely dedication written for this wonderful form. A fantastic entry Andrea and many thanks on commenting on my poetry. Been very busy with work, life, and most of all a heart-broken relationship! Gosh love sucks: )

  1. Date: 1/31/2012 5:50:00 PM
    what a cute entry for the contest andrea :-) but FOURTEEN YEARS!?!! I seem to recall kindergarten kisses, precocious haha

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