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First Kiss

His boyish charm; his arm around my shoulder; my fluttering heart.
His lips softly met mine, and in that long, smooth hot summer night’s kiss,
all that I’d longed for in my fourteen years suddenly blossomed.

For the First Kiss Contest of Craig Cornish

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    Debbie Guzzi
    Date: 8/23/2012 6:20:00 PM
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    Lucky you to have a GREAt first kiss! Congrad's on your win! Light & Love
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    Yesha Shah
    Date: 8/23/2012 5:05:00 AM
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    Congrats Andrea on a great win!!
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    Suzette Crous
    Date: 8/23/2012 1:04:00 AM
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    Growing up, we carry an expectation with us and I'm happy to read that yours were met. Congratulations on your win, Andrea . Suzette
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    Joann Grisetti
    Date: 8/22/2012 1:04:00 PM
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    A lovely sijo. So much can be said in 3 short lines. Congratulations ona terrific kiss.
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    Carol Sunshine Brown
    Date: 8/22/2012 10:42:00 AM
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    Congratulations on your win in Craig's "First Kiss" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
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    Leonora Galinta
    Date: 8/22/2012 9:35:00 AM
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    my warm and heartfelt CONGRATULATIONS on your win my dear friend, Andrea!!
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    Tim Ryerson
    Date: 8/22/2012 3:59:00 AM
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    Congratulations my friend!...I gotta' look up this poetry form...looks like it's 3 lines, 8 meter verse?...Anyway, I like it! - Tim
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    Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 8/22/2012 3:05:00 AM
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    Congratulations on your win Andy you smoothy xx
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    Joseph May
    Date: 8/21/2012 8:56:00 PM
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    very romantic ....congrats on your win Andrea
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    Katie Telling
    Date: 2/6/2012 12:26:00 AM
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    This is so sweet! I absolutely love this poem :)
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    Connie Marcum Wong
    Date: 2/2/2012 10:33:00 PM
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    How charming and romantic! Loved it. Best of luck in the contest.
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    jack horne
    Date: 2/2/2012 1:28:00 PM
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    Lovely tribute to Glen - wouldn't it be funny if he's a Soup member and read this!
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    Poet Destroyer A
    Date: 2/1/2012 9:35:00 PM
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    sweet....yup... good luck...pd
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    Robert Pettit
    Date: 2/1/2012 5:20:00 PM
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    Nice write about a puppy love from the past. Good write Andrea. I've also sent you soup mail.
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    Black Eyed Susan
    Date: 2/1/2012 8:11:00 AM
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    Wow! This has a great flow to it (so I must be doing something wrong) I love blossom at the end :)
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    Dalila Agtani
    Date: 1/31/2012 9:36:00 PM
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    You pictured the first kiss so well Andrea! How can one forget the "fluttering heart" the luv dav, luv dav, luv duv... I love this piece, you portrayed it so well! Your suggestions are well appreciated. Thanks for following my work. Love Dalila
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    Linda-Marie SweetHeart
    Date: 1/31/2012 8:28:00 PM
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    wow Andrea..we both began our kissing careers at a young age.. oh so fun to experience that first blush of luv captured in your lines my friend.. hope Glenn knows what he missed.. I know my ex sure does.. haha.. good luck luv..
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    Johnny Sumler
    Date: 1/31/2012 7:23:00 PM
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    Wow what a lovely dedication written for this wonderful form. A fantastic entry Andrea and many thanks on commenting on my poetry. Been very busy with work, life, and most of all a heart-broken relationship! Gosh love sucks: )
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    Charlotte Puddifoot
    Date: 1/31/2012 5:50:00 PM
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    what a cute entry for the contest andrea :-) but FOURTEEN YEARS!?!! I seem to recall kindergarten kisses, precocious haha
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    robert johnson
    Date: 1/31/2012 3:30:00 PM
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    I forgot what I remember. Was it July or november. When she wooed me to the back seat of her car. I woke up in the morning, had forgot about the warning. That it's not polite for girls to go that far.
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    MAUREEN LEFANUE
    Date: 1/31/2012 2:54:00 PM
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    It sure will be a joyous day, Andrea. Who knows we could be neighbors. There's going to be a lot of people in the new earth and that's why there won't be any sea. I love your First Kiss poem - it is so sweet. I wish you well in Tracie's Contest. Luv, Maureen x
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    Arild Andresen Ertsland
    Date: 1/31/2012 2:47:00 PM
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    Lights went off first time I kissed..but I rembered it tastet good..hahaha:)
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    Gwendolen R.
    Date: 1/31/2012 2:44:00 PM
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    I just yahoooo'd you...check your email. G.
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    Tony Lane
    Date: 1/31/2012 2:25:00 PM
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    I missed her lips on my first try. She won't let me forget it either.
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    Gwendolen R.
    Date: 1/31/2012 2:12:00 PM
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    I could have used FEAT, YOU ARE RIGHT!! See, that's way you are the expert of words! I never even tho't of that one. ...Good luck in this contest, lady..Gwendolen
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    David Williams
    Date: 1/31/2012 2:03:00 PM
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    ah, you are just assuming it is not true....wait for my memoirs....yours truly Glen............
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    daver austin
    Date: 1/31/2012 12:30:00 PM
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    Good nostalgia. Have you heard, She wouldn't first kiss me in the canoe, so I paddled her back? Luck in the contest. Love, daver
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    kash poet
    Date: 1/31/2012 10:35:00 AM
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    Oh!You still remember that one!!I can't.Actually every kiss is a first kiss to me....LoL.A cute poem.Is it for Glen or Gwen?Best wishes.

    Dietrich Avatar Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/31/2012 12:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    why are people asking me if this is for Gwen? hahahaha. I'm not BI!!!!
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    nette onclaud
    Date: 1/31/2012 9:56:00 AM
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    andie, ahha you srill remember, lol... nothing like the blush of a first kiss; dazzling write with winning huggles! :)
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    Michele Ortiz
    Date: 1/31/2012 9:25:00 AM
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    So adorable. I remember my first kiss too and it wasn't half this nice :)
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