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In Her Skin

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In Her Skin

she's lost 
and she's hiding
worn from the battle she's fighting
never crying
but always wishing
that there's something big she's missing
she is here
but feeling hopeless
in the mirror she sees an ogress
feeling foreign
in her own skin
in every game she cannot win
she's scared
and she's shaking
while the cold, cruel world is waking
she is up- 
always awake
her biggest fear, her worst mistake

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  1. Date: 2/6/2012 7:34:00 PM

    I feel like this sometimes, too... cheer up, J. <3 Wonderfully sad poem =Juli-Michelle=

  1. Date: 1/31/2012 10:00:00 PM

    Sad and beautiful...congrats on your win! Blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 1/31/2012 8:18:00 PM

    Do you know what the definition of fear is? F alse E vidence A ppearing R eal Nice write J. wishing you courage and nights filled with a carpet of stars to lie at your feet. love, vie

    Dover Avatar J. Dover Date: 2/1/2012 8:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    <3 Thank you, Vie :) You're so sweet
  1. Date: 1/31/2012 6:45:00 PM

    J.D. You are the avatar--big warm eyes, a wistful glance, a shy smile and a kind heart. You are beautiful, let no one say otherwise. Craig

    Dover Avatar J. Dover Date: 2/1/2012 8:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank You, Craig <3 That brightened my day to read this after a long day :D
  1. Date: 1/31/2012 2:18:00 PM

    A sad lament laid upon this page. Well written J. Congratulations

  1. Date: 1/31/2012 1:56:00 PM

    excellent flow, it's awful to feel this way yet reading writes like this lets others know they are not alone and that is a tremndous gift you are giving us! Congrad's Light & love

  1. Date: 1/31/2012 1:23:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win J. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 1/31/2012 11:52:00 AM

    Congratulations liked it before, well done x

  1. Date: 1/31/2012 7:45:00 AM

    It is exciting to see the replenishment of new poetry here everyday when I log on. I enjoy the diverse poetry so I am never bored by most of what I read. I am happy to have read your poetry this morning J. I hope that you might be able to find the time to read some of the other poetry here also. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 1/31/2012 1:26:00 AM

    Yes this is good x

  1. Date: 1/30/2012 9:21:00 PM

    love this!