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AFTER THE FURY

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AFTER THE FURY



Brazen night winds crash brittle glass of our furious voices Quieting down, we slowly climb inside eyes lit with dear splendor A flood of kisses roam north to west of mouths--- drowning stars

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  1. Date: 8/15/2012 11:23:00 PM
    Nette, Congratulations in Brian's CONTEST NO 196. enjoyed stopping by *luv~PD

  1. Date: 8/15/2012 5:21:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Brian's "#196" contest Nette.

  1. Date: 8/13/2012 7:33:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win Nette. So nice to read your work. Lee

  1. Date: 8/13/2012 2:27:00 AM
    Nette, congrats on your win..David

  1. Date: 8/13/2012 1:21:00 AM
    Nette,, congratulations in Brian Strand's contest.. take care....xox~ PD

  1. Date: 2/7/2012 8:06:00 AM
    Congratulations to you on your win in Tracie 's "Sijo Kisses" contest Nette. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/5/2012 9:26:00 PM
    Congrats on your win! Blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 2/5/2012 1:42:00 PM
    congrats on your win nette, after the fury comes the making up...great imagery, a different take on the theme :-)

  1. Date: 2/5/2012 9:05:00 AM
    Nette congrats on your win..David

  1. Date: 2/5/2012 8:29:00 AM
    congrats Nette luv on a terrific third place win for these excitng sijo lines of kisses.. luv the vocab in this piece.. so stunning my friend..

  1. Date: 2/1/2012 9:09:00 PM
    I like the metaphor of this one. Very interesting sijo writing, my friend! Good luck in the contest.

  1. Date: 2/1/2012 9:05:00 AM
    i love a good fight

  1. Date: 1/31/2012 7:43:00 AM
    It is exciting to see the replenishment of new poetry here everyday when I log on. I enjoy the diverse poetry so I am never bored by most of what I read. I am happy to have read your poetry this morning Nette. I hope that you might be able to find the time to read some of the other poetry here also. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 1/31/2012 5:34:00 AM
    there is enough to think about for a while in this piece..luv, jag

  1. Date: 1/31/2012 5:13:00 AM
    As I dissect this sijo written by the master, I can see where I have much growing to do..your elements distinctly stand out and instruct me...thanks! This looks like a great makeup scene. lol.. Gwendolen

  1. Date: 1/30/2012 9:05:00 PM
    Lovely flood of kisses enjoyed. Best wishes for the contest, loved, bl

  1. Date: 1/30/2012 8:22:00 PM
    I have read this a few times and find more beauty with every read! Furious voices leading to floods of kisses. I can't get enough!

  1. Date: 1/30/2012 8:10:00 PM
    Ahhhh now that is sweet bliss Nette! I love the roaming of the kiss from north to west! I was going to have the kiss be rolling but it didn't fit in well with what I was doing! This is a fantastic write here Nette, I really enjoyed it immensely! Such sweet descriptions you have written! Great Work!!

  1. Date: 1/30/2012 8:06:00 PM
    Beautiful poem.I wonder why North to West.Best wishes.

  1. Date: 1/30/2012 7:23:00 PM
    Enjoying and powerful read , thank you nette , Declan

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