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Hearts Afire

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Hearts Afire

Clad in a negligee, I hear him whisper, “Come to me.”
Demurely I withdraw, but he rushes to me filled with passion.
Taking me in his arms, he kisses me, setting hearts afire.

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  1. Date: 2/7/2012 7:58:00 AM
    Congratulations to you on your win in Tracie 's "Sijo Kisses" contest Carolyn. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/7/2012 5:17:00 AM
    Well done sizzling stuff- ouch- LOL : ) Brenda

  1. Date: 2/5/2012 9:32:00 PM
    Congrats on your win with this romantic sijo! Blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 2/5/2012 9:02:00 AM
    Carolyn congrats on another superb win..David

  1. Date: 2/5/2012 8:22:00 AM
    congrats Carolyn on a splendid second place win for these fiery hearts ablaze with poetic art luv..

  1. Date: 2/5/2012 7:24:00 AM
    Now where's the fire extinguisher when ya need it...? i must say iv'e enjoyed this write Carolyn,, and how are you girl..? always thinking on you..Joe..)

  1. Date: 2/5/2012 4:04:00 AM
    Wow Carolyn, its getting hot in here right now. love this, good luck in contest. harry

  1. Date: 2/3/2012 7:40:00 AM
    AWawaWA....sIZZLING AND Grilling.....:) sO NICE TO BE ABLE TO MAKE IT HERE..AND READ YOUR BEAUTIFUL SWEET HEART MY DEAREST FRIEND.......Charma

  1. Date: 2/2/2012 2:03:00 PM
    Wow, romantic and passionate piece, my friend

  1. Date: 1/31/2012 12:40:00 PM
    Be still, old pacemaker! You have aged me at least 6 months with this one. "Come weez me to za Cazbah." Charles Boyer to someone, way back when. Love your passion. Love, daver

  1. Date: 1/31/2012 5:49:00 AM
    you have said it all without resorting to high sounding phrases, jag

  1. Date: 1/30/2012 9:02:00 PM
    Kisses are very hot in lover's arms set heart afire, lovely scene snapped with sweet words. Enjoyed and loved and wishing you all the best in the contest, bl

  1. Date: 1/30/2012 8:49:00 PM
    oooh lalala. now I gotta get inspired and do one too!!!!

  1. Date: 1/30/2012 6:29:00 PM
    An enjoyable sijo Carolyn thanks for sharing , Hugs Declan xx

  1. Date: 1/30/2012 2:43:00 PM
    Very passionate. I love these types of poems :)

  1. Date: 1/30/2012 2:31:00 PM
    What a special poem this one is Carolyn! I really love passion especially with romance! This one brings out both! Wonderful Work my friend!!

  1. Date: 1/30/2012 12:59:00 PM
    Smile ˜ Yessss, most definitely I could see this wonderful moment occuring with a lady as beautiful as Your beautiful self, my dear beautiful Carolyn ˜ My love, Always, John!:) ˜

  1. Date: 1/30/2012 12:23:00 PM
    wonderful imagery to complete the scene in this enchanting entry for Tracie.. good luck Carolyn.. and thankxx for your message.. we continue to struggle with our health issues but continually share our creative spirits .. luv..