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Exhilarate Me

Michele Ortiz Avatar    Block poet from commenting on your poetry

Below is the poem entitled Exhilarate Me which was written by poet Michele Ortiz. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Exhilarate Me

Press me from behind

My back to your chest

Your flesh between my thighs

Exhilarate me

Watch my blush rise

From my breast 

Up my long neck

My face glows

The solidness of you

Fills up the substance of me

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  1. Date: 2/12/2012 11:22:00 AM
    Hot!

  1. Date: 2/1/2012 2:07:00 AM
    Nicely done,great writing Michele!oxox Laila

    Ortiz Avatar Michele Ortiz
    Date: 2/1/2012 8:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you :)
  1. Date: 1/31/2012 6:28:00 AM
    Michele,wery well written. love Anne-Lise

    Ortiz Avatar Michele Ortiz
    Date: 1/31/2012 6:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Good! I was trying to create a visual without being vulgar. Just simply describe a passionate moment. I'm glad you liked it :)
  1. Date: 1/30/2012 3:52:00 PM
    Well, that poem certainly did exhilarate me. Nicely done, Michele.

    Ortiz Avatar Michele Ortiz
    Date: 1/31/2012 6:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    It "exhilarated" me too when I wrote it :) Thank you for the comment!
  1. Date: 1/30/2012 2:15:00 PM
    Great poem with much feeling being expressed. it enchances the reader mind.

    Ortiz Avatar Michele Ortiz
    Date: 1/30/2012 2:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you - I'm so glad you could sense the feeling behind this :)