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Going Gone

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Going Gone

You are here, You are there, You'll be in my head forever, You'll be in my thin air. You're the bubble to my wrap, You're the hands to my clap, You're the lines on a map, You're the baby in my lap. Because no one is like you, You're the beauty in a heart, Leaving is like a hole. A hole that wasn't meant to be finished, From the start. But when you're going gone, All the memories are burned. All the lessons that I learned. You made me feel like I'm smart. And now you're going gone. Going Gone, Going gooone. Going gone. Because no one is like you, You're the beauty in a heart, Leaving is like a hole. A hole that wasn't meant to be finished, From the start. You are seared in my memories. There's a hole in my heart. I want you back so bad. Dreaming of you is a nightmare... But when you're going gone, All the memories are burned. All the lessons that I learned. You made me feel like I'm smart. And now you're going gone. Going Gone, Going gooone. Going gone. When I didn't know I had you. I figured It when you were, Going gone. But when you're going gone, All the memories are burned. All the lessons that I learned. You made me feel like I'm smart. And now you're going gone. Going Gone, Going gooone. Going gone. Going gone.

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  1. Date: 1/31/2012 8:51:00 AM
    I love writing this song. All the lyrics just came to me. :) It was a lot of fun. Maybe I'll make a music video?.? COMMENT IF YOU WANT TO SEE A MUSIC VIDEO FOR THIS SONG.

  1. Date: 1/30/2012 9:10:00 AM
    this is going to be absolutely great...its great even unfinished