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  1. Date: 1/30/2012 9:08:00 PM
    haha, love how you tried to get in your syllables!! Very cute title for this millipede sijo!!

  1. Date: 1/30/2012 6:46:00 PM
    got dizzy with your 'choos', david, lol... yes, 14 syll for last line..:) hugggs!

  1. Date: 1/30/2012 3:18:00 PM
    I really love this, I am going to place it 1st place in my head, chooo chooo take it away David to the winners circle, hugs vie

  1. Date: 1/30/2012 12:21:00 PM
    ahh, david!!!.. kindly check last line: Sijo has three long lines. Each line varies between 14 and 16 syllables, with the MIDDLE line often the longest...:) hugggs!

  1. Date: 1/30/2012 9:13:00 AM cute !!!

  1. Date: 1/30/2012 8:46:00 AM
    cute poem, david! Enjoyed! Hugs, catie :)