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Surrender

feeling powerless
surrendering to passion
hankering for more

curse rhyme or reason
allow your heart to decide 
listen intently

elbow fear aside
seize the moment and hold on
surrender to it

Diana-Marie Bombardieri
January 28, 2012

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  1. Date: 4/19/2012 11:52:00 AM
    Stopping by to say Thank You for your kind comments on my poetry Diana-Marie. It is a pleasure to read your writings. Have a wonderful day. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 1/29/2012 11:17:00 AM
    this is not showing up as entered on the contest page, you need to enter it quickly as there are only 2 spots left

    Bombardieri Avatar Diana-Marie Bombardieri
    Date: 1/29/2012 11:37:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Oh dear! Thought I entered it! thanks Francine:)
  1. Date: 1/29/2012 10:53:00 AM
    It reads like a winner,Diana:) I surrender to it.Take Care,Arild

  1. Date: 1/29/2012 8:08:00 AM
    Well done Diana-Marie, it's great to have talented young blood to mix into the soup. I have to chuckle picturing everyone writing these and tapping their fingers on the desk to count the 5-7-5 and then going back when done to tap again one last time to make sure there was no miscount!

  1. Date: 1/29/2012 5:43:00 AM
    You are a brilliant poet Diana-Marie !!!oxox love Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 1/28/2012 10:54:00 PM
    Diana, a very good romantic entry... surrender says it all.. good luck~.always..pd

  1. Date: 1/28/2012 10:50:00 PM
    Three good viable senryu for Francine's contest. Good work Diana-Marie.