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the moment

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Below is the poem entitled the moment which was written by poet Wesley Evans. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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the moment

Crunch, Crunch.
Leaves heralding
Brown forms ghosting through oaks.
Pulse quickens, hands sweat, try to breathe.

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  1. Date: 1/28/2012 9:53:00 PM

    Great cinquain Wesley!! thanks for sharing:)

    Evans Avatar Wesley Evans Date: 1/28/2012 10:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks. I like cinquains since it forces ne to use the most "precise" words I can.
  1. Date: 1/28/2012 9:47:00 PM

    it's takes a turn of events at the ending. I thought that the narrator was being chased in the woods at first. So it makes me think about what is actually happening which is good for a writer because it makes the reader think about your writing. So great job!

    Evans Avatar Wesley Evans Date: 1/28/2012 10:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for the feedback. I wrote most of these poems this Fall trying to capture the sights, sounds and feelings that are precious to me as a avid outdoorsman.