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NICOTINE

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NICOTINE

nicotine *LIFE WHAT A RUSH*

Silence needs to be spoken and released like a cigarette. 
The joy, the laughter and the expression found in a silhouette. 

Inhale the wholesomeness.  
Exhale the worthiness. 

The soul- addicted to all the toxins this world contains.
Like nicotine circulating throughout your veins.

Anger is a venom that $ucks in all the fumes that flow.
Triggers the mind~ and you'll see smoke blow. 

Hope entwined with clouds of wisdom.
Like tobacco strangling every inch of my nerves system. 

Vapors exceeding emotions love and devotion.
Smog proceeding in slow motion.

Puffing the most beautiful spirited bodies and mind.
Filtering all the bad nicotine your breath left behind.

~COUPLETMETER~ by;LINDA

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  1. Date: 1/29/2014 2:48:00 PM
    Clever metaphor PD., smoke has such a wonderful quality to it, a dancining personality. I'm gonna go have a smoke and think of your dynamics - J.A.B.

  1. Date: 12/22/2013 4:18:00 PM
    on that note....smoke break, aha....killer couplet!

  1. Date: 11/20/2013 7:00:00 PM
    This is brilliant poem Linda. but then again all your poems are brilliant. enjoyed this one....Peter

  1. Date: 11/8/2012 8:40:00 AM
    found one i've not seen before, this is excellent, but i find words hard to come by, at the moment.. but then you are the best.

  1. Date: 9/1/2012 1:58:00 PM
    very nice. thanks for stopping by to read my work

  1. Date: 8/13/2012 8:15:00 PM
    This is a grandiose write with great flavor! Nice work, PD!....Well, I must say that I tried to have the time of my life at 37...it backfired! hahah...No TV for u too? Wow...now there;s one thing we have in common...I used to get 2 hrs of news daily and now I cancelled cable and have more productive things to do...I haven't written for a few wks..maybe tonite I can squeeeaaak out a poem or 2?....hmmm, just maybe...(gotta love that last line of this nicotine poem! What a gas!) gwendoeln

  1. Date: 6/25/2012 12:04:00 PM
    stopping by to clap for this super treat with a strong puff- off sign in the end, PD.. one of your best!..:) have a delightful day..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 6/8/2012 1:38:00 PM
    i like the word combination silhouette actually a frenchg word for shadow rhymin with cigarette again nice peace x david scott

  1. Date: 5/31/2012 6:33:00 PM
    yeah... i love cogarettes too

  1. Date: 5/30/2012 10:06:00 AM
    Cigarettes actually aint that bad & sometimes it can be your best friend...;). Enjoyed your poem Linda...great write. (time to inhale some wholesomeness!!!)

  1. Date: 5/7/2012 8:55:00 AM
    loved this lovely one, PD - I missed this one, somehow, and am glad I read it today. I'm doing good, thanks - hope you are too, my friend. How's your family?

  1. Date: 5/6/2012 12:22:00 AM
    Hold on and I'll huff and puff you a review as I wade through the smog and vapors and exhale for you. Hope you didn't mind my bit of fun and I brushed my teeth first. Quite a write you have here. TLee

  1. Date: 4/30/2012 1:11:00 AM
    WHEW! Linda, I'm trying to quit..workin on it hehe...nice detailed account. I'll keep this one on favorites...Cya soon

  1. Date: 4/18/2012 11:12:00 PM
    This is simply amazing.Wow great write.

  1. Date: 4/12/2012 10:45:00 PM
    Love this! I tried to write a poem about smoking the other day, didn't work. But you did a great job on this one! <3

  1. Date: 2/24/2012 8:28:00 PM
    Hella clean. It needs one of my beats to this one.

  1. Date: 2/19/2012 11:19:00 PM
    Ooooh! Great poetry Pd :) I can see the truth in your words...(belated) Congratulations on your win!

  1. Date: 2/19/2012 7:28:00 PM
    Just came to say HEY, IRMA. Hope you are having a GREAT day.

  1. Date: 2/18/2012 1:16:00 AM
    Thanks mate...well done here..

  1. Date: 2/13/2012 8:29:00 PM
    Great poetic way to describe a very insalubrious habit so many people have.

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