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Only god can judge me

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Only god can judge me

two gunshots to the chest 
   thinking what can happen next... 

will i live to see tommorrow 
   or will i live to see the rest... 


of my life,it hurts inside, 
   when this morning i had the pride... 


to see my little girl, wave to her dad, goodbye 
   as the morning sun would rise,from the happiness in her eyes... 


knowing down inside, it would be her last good bye 
  cause im starting to see a glow,and a river to paradise... 


a shadow in the mist, 
   while my life flashes over... 



one drink of the holy water 
   cause my life was left sober... 


i can feel nomore pain, 
   as the angels start to rain... 


 i know for a fact im dead 
   cause nomore pain, is strange... 


i ask for forgivness as i softly speak 
   cause i remember shooting someone,but my mind was to weak... 


all i can make out was falling to my knees 
   knowing i was dead,was to hard to believe... 


i woke up in a room 
   with a pain when i would breath... 


with a clear image of what really happen to me 
   i lost my job, telling god why this had to be... 


i put my gun to my chest, 
   and you all know the rest... 


the last thing i said was 
   only god can judge me... 


but as i lost my job, 
   and was quickly depressed... 



it all came to complete... 


as knowing would i no, without the affect 
   he was already judging me..... 
   

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