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make me smile

we laugh and joke and play a while
it doesn't take much to make me smile
all you do and what you say
captures my heart and takes me away
your always near, loves never far
i see myself where ever you are
come lay down in my arms awhile
it doesn't take much to make me smile

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  1. Date: 1/27/2012 7:27:00 AM

    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you today Dillon. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 1/27/2012 5:00:00 AM

    as well i find myself smiling to this piece... thanks for sharing:D

  1. Date: 1/27/2012 3:58:00 AM

    I smile to my friend. oxox love Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 1/27/2012 2:34:00 AM

    "Thank's A Million", for making me smile, this is a nice poem