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from starved, to death

as travelers do
i searched for food
drifts of snow
i fought my way through
i came to a cabin
deep in the woods
i knocked politely
as any man should
there came no answer
nobody is home
i walked inside
feeling ever alone
a loaf of bread
don't mind if i do
my taste buds ignite
and just as i chew
the shot rang out
i hit the floor
the blood ran thick
I'm hungry no more
my body went numb
now i cant see
from starved, to death
there's no saving me

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  1. Date: 2/29/2012 9:14:00 AM

    Real good read

  1. Date: 1/31/2012 5:57:00 PM

    I am stunned! Congratulations on your featured work, Dillon!

    lewis Avatar dillon lewis Date: 2/1/2012 1:54:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you guys so much, i cant believe they actually featured one of mine :)
  1. Date: 1/31/2012 11:36:00 AM

    Congratulations on being featured this week!

  1. Date: 1/30/2012 8:45:00 AM

    Dillon -- Very stunning bit of poetry. A wonderful choice to be featured. Kathy

  1. Date: 1/30/2012 6:46:00 AM

    Congratulations on your well deserved featured poetry this week Dillon. Love, Carol