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Sun Moon

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Sun Moon

Sun/Moon
light parades through clouds
heat is coming down from sky
bright shine sets the day
brightness lights the night
shadows are cast all about
stars sparkled about
a day of delight
closes into a night of bliss
sun and moon collide
For P.D's 3rd Place winner contest 4th Place Winner For Linda-Marie's "Haiku Hodgepodge..Trio Contest Written by: Carol Brown 3rd Place Winner

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  1. Date: 3/10/2012 11:58:00 AM
    Great trio of haiku, Carol! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 3/8/2012 7:43:00 AM
    loved the end line.............congrats on the placement............~sashi

  1. Date: 3/8/2012 6:21:00 AM
    Hi there, Carol! I remember this contest so well and this was a rockin' entry! This contest actually helped poets create lil mini masterpieces with great images just like this one! Glad it won AGAIN!...son and moon colliding is a result of our Creator's great magical wand! The Spring is bursting with tons of great images similar to your haiku! Love, GWendolen

  1. Date: 3/7/2012 9:03:00 PM
    congrats Carol on this double winning poem for PD's #3 contest winners.. loved it then.. luv it now ..

  1. Date: 3/7/2012 5:56:00 PM
    One never tires of tales of moonlight! Congrad's On Your win! Light & Love

  1. Date: 3/7/2012 11:53:00 AM
    Congrats Carol...superb win.

  1. Date: 3/7/2012 10:49:00 AM
    Thank you for the placement in your contest P.D. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 3/7/2012 10:06:00 AM
    CAROL~.Congratulations! THANK YOU FOR THE SUPPORTING ;-) my contest...much enjoyed your entry,~ always*PD

  1. Date: 2/5/2012 5:05:00 AM
    Carol, Well done. Congrats on your win............S.Ronthorpe

  1. Date: 2/1/2012 3:50:00 PM
    Congrats with a great poem......George

  1. Date: 2/1/2012 2:05:00 AM
    Congrats on your win Carol

  1. Date: 1/31/2012 2:17:00 PM
    Nice set of haikus, Carol. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 1/31/2012 8:49:00 AM
    just beautiful, congrats on your win Carol

  1. Date: 1/31/2012 7:40:00 AM
    A collision of the most beautiful kind Carol, congrats. on your super win. love and light, vie

  1. Date: 1/31/2012 1:01:00 AM
    Carol congrats on your win, love them but I hope they never collide.David

  1. Date: 1/30/2012 8:37:00 PM
    Many congratulation on your win, loved and enjoyed, bl

  1. Date: 1/30/2012 4:24:00 PM
    Beautiful images Carol, congrats..Craig

  1. Date: 1/30/2012 3:55:00 PM
    wow, I really enjoyed that last one where sun and moon collide, and that's when we see such gorgeous colors! Congrats on a well deserved win, Carol.

  1. Date: 1/30/2012 1:59:00 PM
    Congratulations on your wonderful write, Jon

  1. Date: 1/30/2012 1:53:00 PM
    Thank you for my placement Linda-Marie. Love, Carol

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